wow wow wow
it...said everything that was left unsaid. it was. magnificent.

*APPLAUSE*

LOVED IT! I really hope you'll do a sequel! :P

I love your stories - they are always exceptional reading - but this one is one of the best you've written. You not only captured the essence of the story, you captured the essence of all the relationships of NCIS and expanded it.

Outstanding writing - I think this is my favorite of your NCIS work!

Oh it's so beautiful.

wow, that was brilliant, one of the best stories I've seen portraying Gibbs and Ziva's relationship, I'm really scared for next week though, I completely hate Vance with a passion and all summer refused to believe that what he told Gibbs about Ziva was true, but now, as next week's episode approaches, I'm really scared, I saw the brief glimpse of the scene with Ziva and Gibbs in his basement, and the outcome of that conversation and what it might do to their relationship terrifies me.

Yay, that's totally lovely... :) Good view of Ziva's loyalties. I totally loved that ep'. And I agree with you, Cote's acting was incredible... she's talented...

Now I know you don't write Giva (do you ;) ) but when I read the line from next episode "Ziva's fate lies in Gibbs' hands", I couldn't stop myself from imagining that in order to get her over her self-pity he should be totally domly with her ;)

Great fic...

love love love the story! its the completing peice to the actual premiere..very good job!

Good story.
Darned good.

That was very well done and haunting!

Great Job again. Wow are you still up oh my goodness I'm so happy to see this and I love it. were you able to see next weeks episode highlights?? Sighs.. What is up with her. Sighs. She has to work through so much. Giggles I loved when Tony says to her if you seriously don't want to know the answer then don't ask the question. Hugs you GREAT Job.