OMG! Poor Monica and I feel so sorry for Jack and Erica! Update soon plz

Oh wow, the introduction is amazing. I would love to read more, please do continue this sotry. I would love to read more.

Loved it! Can't wait to find out what happens next! Please continue with this. It's really good. :) Cheers!

Loved it! Cannot wait for next chapter so please update soon

That was cute, but tinged with sadness. Like the new additions to the Bing family, and Monica putting the plates in size order.
I could tell that like me you are in the UK, watch the little differences - eg dinner, not tea perhaps ? garbage, not the bin ? But despite what you say you are a good and very readable writer and I look forward to more Mondler angst soon :-)