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Reviews for: These Masks We Wear
mimi
2009-11-30 . chapter 1
So sad.I love how you accept the reality that Naruto can't have babies (as much as he wants to).It's hard for me to read mpreg stories because they seem to really feminise Naruto and he really isn't very feminine at all.Also, the occurence of mpreg makes the story unrealistic and makes it seem too much like a fairytale romance which Sasuke's and Naruto's isn't.It's complicated and painful and though I do love a happy ending mpreg does seem a little (in some cases a lot) overboard.

Sorry for the rant I just really had to get that off my chest.

Keep up the good work you have great writing skills and the way you've portrayed their relationship in this story is interesting.
Cirrat
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
Now this one is really good! Thank you for writing this.
DeathsMelody
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
That was sad. And very good. ^_^ I love it. Who's Sasuke's wife tho? Just some random oc?
inumoon3
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
This is so sad. :(
I think you should write a sequel were they find out Naruto can have his babies.
Just a thought!
Really loved it!
YaoiLuver93
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
aw! this was sad and also really good! im not really into angasty things but this is really good!
cb
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
cute story but soo sad :)
FallingForNobody
2009-09-23 . chapter 1
Aw...This was so sad. And touching. And bittersweet...and it was really really good :) <3 I absolutely loved it. ^^
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