Completely heartbreaking, but brilliant

this made me die inside. this is probably one of the best written mortal instruments fics on this site. you're marvelous!

This was so sad, and amazing. I think you should wright a multi-chapter fan fiction.

So heart breakingly good! Im sobbing. Your characterizations were so spot on. I really hope you write a multi-chap I would love to read it. I think you understand the characters so well.

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Oh damn.

This... almost had me in tears, honest.

They didnt say 'I love you' one last time though. :[

Very great piece, a lot of angst you got there

Oh. My. GOD. THIS WAS AMAZING. Hands down amazing. It made me bawl. OMG.

Girl, you write Zenith (sorry, totally off topic)? I've been meaning to get around to reading that.

But anyway, I've only been a fan of TMI for a little while and I've only read The City of Bones, but I loved this story. It's fueling me while I dive through the pile of library books that keep accumulating whenever I drop off more books while my friend's copy of City of Ashes sits on my night stand. It's beautifully written and I love Jace and Clary as characters; I think they're an amazing couple :) Great work.

I loved how you put crying and screaming. I've read where people shut down, but vulnerability and helpless is real. It's sad. You did a great job.

I feel so bad though Alec and Isabelle can only take so much, then Maryse! Oh no.

But it was beautiful.

Oh wow. . . That was heartbreaking. I loved it!

omg he dies with clary in his arms. thats so cute and totally depressing but really sweet. i would love to die in the arms of someone i love.

Oh my gosh, that is really sad! Your an awsome writer btw. Does that mean that jace just always holds her or that he died and their both in heaven? Really good, I almost cried

Wow. Bittersweet, beautiful, very, very sad...I loved it :) TMI angst is the best, and you really had it down perfectly. Just one thing (it's tiny and nitpicky, but your fic is so good there's really not anything else) 'stele' is spelt like that, not 'steele'. It just jarred me out of the narrative a bit :)

Otherwise, good work..I really enjoyed it!

That was beautiful. And completely heartbreaking, and amazing, and I'm kind of in tears right now, because that was so sweet. I loved their final moments, which weren't over the top or unrealistic, but fit their characters and their love for each other. This was so tragic and lovely. Thank you for such a fantastic story.

Great story, I always like the sad ones, guess I'm a cruel person.0

wow i love this. completely. It would be awesome if you wrote an epilogue or something that showed them meeting again now that he;s died too. )