 Buffyxenaman 10/31/09 . chapter 1lol that was a awesome idea. God job |
 Umbrella Doves 10/9/09 . chapter 1Complete crack, just how I like it. 8D |
 fresca girl 9/25/09 . chapter 1Hahahaha! Very Funny! My favorite part is in between Mohinder's phone call with Sylar and Hiro's part at the end! Very hilarious! Ah, I just luv Cheaters... |
 Daria234 9/25/09 . chapter 1That story. Was. SO. Awesome. :)
Loved it SO hard. And
"Mohinder weeps, “I thought you love-hated me!”
is the best line. So frakkin' funny.
And the Hiro thing at the end is great too |
 Joey Snackpants 9/25/09 . chapter 1 okay so i dont like slash but i still really liked this because it was so damn funny, i love cheaters too its one of my fav shows. my favorite part was when joey was showing the video cam to mohinder and mohinder started freaking out. then the part at the end with hiro was also funny as hell. great fic, right more. |
 Janellis 9/25/09 . chapter 1 Alright, I know NOTHING about Heroes (only seen one ep), but I still loved this! I read it because I love 'Cheaters', and the fic was just like the show! And whoever that Adam guy is was funny at the end, asking the other guy to go to the back rooms with him.
Hey, maybe you should do a Tekken Cheater's ficcy, huh? XD |
 smithsbabe65 9/24/09 . chapter 1As a general rule, I'm not a big fan of slash fiction.
But...and it's a huge but, I found this to be very good and quite funny.
Hysterical in fact.
I love Cheaters too and I adore Heroes. You did an excellent job of melding these two shows together.
I was especially impressed with the way you were able to incorporate all the elements of Cheaters into the story. And I howled at the conclusion with Hiro. Very, very funny!
My only gripe is that no matter what universe he's in, Mohinder still comes across as a whiny biotch. Not your fault though, that's the way the character has been written from day one.
Keep up the great work! |