Acck! Ghost Shirako made me so sad I just had to stop laughing at Nolo being an unreasonable jerk--almost... Heheh, Lani cann't walk in heels. I really liked this one. You did great!
I cried while editing this and i cried even tho i knew how it was going to end. U did a really great job on this hon, keep up the amazingness (and don't worry, that PM is coming)!! ; )
oh my gosh!! I think I'm going to cry! If that was what you were trying to do, then you accomplished it. I loved it (I have read Car Terror as well). Keep up the good work!