Poor Optimus, all alone. D: Are you gonna extend this? I can see several directions this can go, and it's a good fiction...

Nice job.

Wow, that makes me want to write something slash-tastic.

very nice, I feel for Optimus. But I'm still a Megatron fan. ^_^

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Aww. *sniff sniff*

I can't help but feel sorry for Prime, because I can totally see this happening.

Interesting look at the differences between the two cultures.

This ia a nice introspective look into Optimus Prime's isolated position of leadership.

The loneliness that Optimus must be feeling is so palatable here. Everything from the isolation, to the lack of contact/empathy from the people he cares about, and the fact that in contrast to his situation, Megatron is less isolated than he is. All of this hits home very much. It's all so suffocating and I feel so sorry for Optimus.

My favourite part has to be the last bit with him and the prone body of Ultra Magnus. I could feel the tiredness and resignation from him, and to a lesser extent Ultra Magnus.

Lovely writing as always.