Oh my god

His behavior constitutes that of a rapist. Possession. Control. That's much the same as Assward's treatment of her in both your fic and canon. That ain't love. Even in his telling it sounds like he admits that when he took her, it wasn't out of love. This sounds like the makings of an abusive relationship: a trigger and then some violence, then he lets her know it was her fault, then it flows into a honeymoon stage until it inevitably happens again. In short, I'm going to stop reading now.

So...Mr. I'm-Not-Going-To-Control-You bent her into the snow and dirt and f*cked her like a piece of meat - I'm sorry HIS piece of meat. And Bella's cool with it. Actually, that does seem pretty cannon, Bella is pretty damn submissive. But the bite thing...Really? He bit her when he has such issues with his own scars?

Jasper and Bella sitting in a tree, G...! ]

Ah, the trouble of sending Edward to Denali.

I love the teasing!

Nice that they're acting like a proper family to her - lord knows that'd be an experience for her - but it's kinda weird how much Bella, and Jasper, too, are calling Esme 'Mom'.

Aww...poor Jazzis just anticipating the Forever Friend Zone!

I think Rosalie's idea is excellent, but there is a certain appendage I would suggest not sending, and rather burning instead. Teach a proper lesson.

Certainly sounds like a resort anyone would want to visit...except maybe for the fact that it's in the middle of bumfrick nowhere.

New life with sexy Jazz...not bad at all

Well, I like how this is going, but Jasper's time with Maria and the newborns might've made a better explanation for his being able to change Bella than worry about Bella and determination at the effect of her trust in him...just sayin'.

A very good opening!

.*insertalovelyword.*GOOOOOOOOOODDDD!
That was so AMAZING! Love this fic, I've been obsessed with it and I cannot wait until I finish and READ IT AGAIN! I love your depiction of Bella and Jaspers relationship, how they help each other with their love and all, and your plot is so SUSPENSEFUL! I loved it and also screamed at it. I'm a sucker for action scenes, they are my love. This is a fantastic fic and you have amazing writing skill! :)

I'm glad they made up before the battle because that would have been hard!