Amazing!

I read this all today and i loved it!
xx

Rose is alot like Hermione- very smart and caring. Hugo sounds like such an amusing kid. I like Ophelia but her mom, whoever she is, I don't like her mom. I'm actually close to hating her really. She seems like such a horrible person. I'm glad Ophelia is beginning to see that Snape isn't such a bad man. She needs a good person in her life.

Hmm, I wonder who Ophelia's mother is..?

Excellent, excellent, excellent!

Wow. That was completely and totally epic. I loved how, by the end, Ophelia was more secure in her father's love and was okay with having 3 other siblings. Again, this was majorly epic. I can see this being some hit movie or miniseries and it would probably end up on my list of favorite movies. When I finally get an account, this will be on my favorites.

What a wonderful story. I am impressed at how slowly and carefully you transformed Sev from a cold S.O.B. into a warm and loving family man. The Mary Kelly subplot fits seamlessly into the main story. It was a very thought provoking about how she came to be where she was. I'm not very good at thoughtful reviews but I feel a story of this depth and skill deserved ny best efforts. Thank you for sharing it with me. Now I'm going to go check out your other stories.

aw, what a great story! I'm so glad that I read it all the way through! It only took me three days lol
Now that I know you're German, all the funny sentence structures make perfect sense! I work for Siemens in the US and talk/work with Germans all day, so it just clicked for me. I honestly would have just thought that you were a native English speaker who was lazy with spell check if you hadn't have said anything though!
Thanks for writing this. It's a great story, really enjoyable, and I loved every second of it!
xoxo

Ah! This is so great!
So, I am so addicted that I read your story on my hour and a half each way commute today. On my tiny little phone screen. So glad to get home and read it on my laptop with less eye-strain!
Your writing style is really interesting. At first I found the typos/spelling errors/run on sentences/fragment sentences really annoying, but now it feels really organic and almost like stream of consciousness writing style at times.
By the way, at first I hated Hugo being a muggle, but now I love it.

OH! Evil woman! :) And so goes the age old situation of 'two- people-totally-in-love-with-each-other-but-scared-shitless- because-they're-sure-the-other-person-in-no-way-returns-those feelings.' Gotta love it!

Very well done chapter! I loved the scene where they almost kissed... poor Sev... he needs a good snog! :)

I'm really loving this story... I could feel the tension, the awkwardness of the situation at the end of the chapter. Little Ophelia is very powerful indeed, Apparating her and her Daddy to where she wanted to go with a single thought. I love your portrayal of Molly... a nice diversion from the 'perfect wife and mother' of canon. :) Keep it up! I'm off to read more right now! :)

Aw this is such a cute story! Just wanted to review and let you know how much I'm enjoying it and I'm not even half through!

das letzte chap! nicht so sappy wie das letzte, wunderschön, ein worthy end für eine super story!
und mehr selbstbewusstsein für die weiteren stories! from the corner war kein one hit wonder, dafür hab ich schon genug von dir gelesen, dass genauso gut war!

ich wiederhole mich nochmal: a worthy end! beautiful!

thank you!

Da ich in einem der letzten Kapitel gelesen habe, dass du auch aus Deutschland kommst, hab ich mir gedacht, ich review auch mal auf Deutsch. (Konnte übrigens auch kaum glauben, dass du Deutsch bist, da selbst einige native-speakers unglaublich grausige Grammatik haben.)

Habe in den letzten 2-3 Tagen jede freie Minute die gesamte Geschichte gelesen und ich muss sagen sie ist einfach umwerfend.

Ich war teils hin- und hergerissen zwischen dem Wunsch so eine Vater zu haben und dem Wunsch so einen Mann wie Serverus zu finden.

Was ich nicht verstehen kann ist warum es Beschwerden gab deine Geschichte sei nicht originell, denn ich fand sie einfach einzigartig.
Es war alles sehr gut ausgedacht und absolut interessant geschrieben. Ich hab mich die ganze Zeit beim Lesen so gefühlt, als wäre ich wirklich Teil dieser Geschichte.

Ich lese seit mittlerweile mehr als 8 Jahren Fanfictions und deine Geschichte ist da wirklich unter den Allerbesten.
Dazu muss ich noch sagen, dass ich eigentlich zu 90% Slash lesen und dass das SS/HG Pairing mich nie besonders interessiert hat, aber nach deiner Geschichte denke ich, dass ich mir doch ein paar Stories mit dem Pairing raussuchen werden.

Vorher muss ich aber noch deine anderen Geschichten lesen.

Vielen, vielen Dank für eine so wundervolle Geschichte.

Ganz liebe Grüße,
Julia (ancalimesh)

WOW ! I really loved your story and what you have done with the characters. Lots of sweetness, beautiful interaction between S&O. And the way you created Hermione and Severus relationship was so natural. I think I have a new favourite :)