 Inara Harame 2009-12-24 . chapter 6 Sorry I didn't reveiw last chapter. My computer crashed, my iphone [which until recently has been my ff source] crashed, and I just last night remembered my DSi. great chappies I honestly didn't think you would listen to my suggestions. If you want to add more drama and humor you can maybe have the tentai's kids from the future wreak some mayhem. If you want you can use the kids I made up for my past to future fic. I promise to be a better reviewer [btw I'm probably getting a laptop for Christmas yay me!] ja ne |
 sayainking90 2009-12-21 . chapter 6my pleasure and i forgot to add that i love the ice cream shop part you pulled if off beautify |
 sayainking90 2009-12-09 . chapter 5good,still can't find a complaint about this one, just one question when are they going to school? just curious and about the beta reader as of right now i am active, though i'm probably not the best out there, but the offer's on the table |
 HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9 2009-12-09 . chapter 5please make more chapters soon |
 Inara Harame 2009-11-28 . chapter 4 Citrus it up! Seriously do it. Oh! I have this funny idea you MIGHT use probably not since it sucks but is kinda funny so here it is, Kurama makes some embarassing comment about Hiei and Hiei hears him so to get back at Kurama Hiei handcuffs Kurama and Shizuru together. Kurama gets angry and to get revenge on Hiei Kurama handcuffs Hiei and Botan together. The handcuffs are indestructable and they fall off after one week. Horrible isn't it , but you can use it as filler chapters for a buildup if you need it. How long is this fic going to be? Great so far, ja ne! |
 sayainking90 2009-11-27 . chapter 4it was worth the wait i love it, and just thinking about hiei at school or at a party makes me laugh in a funny and sadistic way, so please don't take to long on the next chap |
 HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9 2009-11-27 . chapter 4i go for citrus. yay they kiss. i like the way you title the chapter.i wonder if hiei and botan will be popular when they go to school.
i'm kinda having a hard to remember..so hiei and botan's mission is to go to school so that they can watch over yusuke..right?
Hiei and Botan 4 ever |
 Inara Harame 2009-11-16 . chapter 3 Please continue this fic. Too many have been left for dead. Make Kurama end up with Shizuru please. I LOVE that couple. Please update soon. Ja ne. |
 sayainking90 2009-11-07 . chapter 3good, as for how to get hiei and botan to started feeling for each other, we all know how short of a temper hiei has and botans worried he'll do something terrible at school if someone pushes one of his wrong buttons (which are all his buttons)so she makes a bet with him if he can behave himself she'll treat him to the ice cream(sweet snow) bar in town, while inside botan, tries to make conversation with hiei. well that's all i have for now, hope it helps, o and as for the love triangle, i think during school have some guys hit on botan, and when they can't take no for and answer hiei steps in, ok well can wait for the next chap. hope everything go's good for you bf and his family |
 HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9 2009-10-20 . chapter 2upload more chapters soon |
 Chimaira009 2009-10-09 . chapter 2oh please update soon this story seems very good and I can't wait to read more! |
 inu-yusukekaiba102 2009-10-06 . chapter 2Please update! |
 sayainking90 2009-10-05 . chapter 2nice chapter i can wait to see what kind of hell is unleashed when these two really start living together |
 Grace 2009-10-04 . chapter 1 awesome begining cant wait to read the rest |
 sestrilla 2009-09-26 . chapter 1i like it so far |