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LADYMALLARD
2009-09-30 . chapter 6
Boy, this chapter certainly had me going, until right to the end. I was just terrified and couldn't believe what was going on with the agents and Big D, locking up the Impossibles, turning against Fluey like that, instead of helping him. I was thinking, there had to be something wrong with this picture and then, draging him out to shoot him. WoW! I was so relieved when it all turned out to be an Nightmare, indused by an underdone Hamburger, coupled with the poison that, that rotten Gypsy fortune teller slipped to Fluey, as revenge for the drug bust. What a story, unusual and amazing at the same time. Great Job!
LADYMALLARD
2009-09-28 . chapter 5
OMG! Fluey's been traped, nearly strangled and Shot, Shee, this is really getting tence. That Jorgensen's attitude is just too bad to be true, he needs an extreme personallity adjustment, somebody had better really set him straight. Coiley's gone to talk to Farmer Miller and get the word about what happened. At least the boys got Fluey right to HQ and medical help. He's safe for now. I hope they can keep him that way, till they can cure the curse. Terrifyingly terrific chapter, Oh, are those pins and needles sharpening, Keep up the great work. Till next time.
LADYMALLARD
2009-09-27 . chapter 4
Boy, this Jorgensen guy, is pretty blood thirsty, even after finding out about Fluey's problem and the other two Impossibles, telling Mr. Miller, to let them handle it. I just hope Multi and Coiley can keep Fluey, out of the moon light, long enough for Danalleah and Winnie to find a way to cure his curse. What suspence, those pins and needles are getting sharper, can't wait for the next chapter, to arrive. Great Job! Till next time...
LADYMALLARD
2009-09-26 . chapter 3
WoW! This is getting really bad, for poor Fluey, Any moon light changes him from human to wolf. It's a lucky thing for Fluey that, that guy Jorgensen was a bad shot. I really hope that Multi, Coiley and Danalleaha can find some way to help him. And now that the farmer has given that piece of hair to Big D and SSHQ labs, they might just discover the connection between the wolf and Fluey, where would that lead? Great Chapter very exciting, I can't wait for the next one to come along.
LADYMALLARD
2009-09-25 . chapter 2
Wow! The Wild Side for sure. This chapter was truely amazing, and very Horror film esq, what a terrible plot, that awful gypsy has brought about. Curse of the wolf, how devistating for poor Fluey. I'm just glad that the animal control people didn't get a hold of him, or worse...What if...that farmer had shot him. Oh, I'd hate to think that could've happened. Bad enough to think, Fluey was stranded out in the country and without any cloths on. Good thing there were towels, to cover up with. I sure hope Danalleah and Winnie can help him, before the next full moon rise, (Wonder if it's just a full or any moon)and he changes again. Great Exciting chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one. Those pins and needles are sure sharpening up. Till next time.
LADYMALLARD
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
What a start to this story, What did that evil woman dose Fluey with, I'm in angst and will be on those darn pins and needles, until the next chapter comes in. Poor Fluey, I can't imagine what the effect, of that Gypsy Witch's action will be, but I know it won't be any good for Fluey, or the rest of the Impossibles. Terrifically exciting, right from the get go! Great job! Till next time.
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