 Murder Junkie 2009-12-07 . chapter 4Ah, highschool romance... Effed up and dramatic, all thanks to teenage hormones. *grins* I just gotta read more! |
 Wicked-Lady-West 2009-12-06 . chapter 4Guess who's gonna get hurt if they don't continue this story? *grins* |
 EarthBird 2009-11-24 . chapter 4when are you gonna continue it??
it's pretty good...
and it's interesting xD
jejeje
well.. good luck, and... continue it as soon as you can!! xD
sayoo!! |
 DMHPsasunaru 2009-11-20 . chapter 4Very interesting so far! Can't wait until your next update. |
 loser-by-choice 2009-11-03 . chapter 4 (loser-by-choice is to lazy to login)
This chapter was cute in it's own way. I love the way you made Dash so jealouse and protective.
Keep the pen flowing,
Much love, LoserBC |
 pelori 2009-10-29 . chapter 4I'm really loving this fic! And i don't see all these grammar errors and typos you're going on about. it's been quite an enjoyable read so far, and I eagerly await the next installment! |
 Desdemona 2009-10-28 . chapter 4 okay, I fricking LOVE protective!Dash. He's so concerned for Danny's welfare, and so very violent. manly. -giggle- And Danny has NO idea what's going on, which is so totally cannon. Code name "clueless"
But what's an omake? Could you explain that in an AN or something? |
 Anonumuss 2009-10-27 . chapter 4 Brilliant story! I'm loving the confusion of the plot! It's brilliant! |
 Apple the Racoon 2009-10-27 . chapter 4 Great story! Please update soon! |
 Thunderstorm101 2009-10-26 . chapter 4Elliot's such a creep...
Heh. He really knows how to play people. That's SO going to bite him in the butt later. |
 Trinity Fenton-Phantom 2009-10-26 . chapter 4great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
 Darmed 2009-10-26 . chapter 4OOH, THE PLOT THICKENS 8D
OMAN, DASH, YOU'RE SUCH A POSSESSIVE ** ;D
I'M NOT REALLY IN THE MOOD TO POST A LONG REVIEW (A LOT OF CRAP HAPPENED) BUT LET ME TELL YOU I AM PROUD OF YOU :'D
YOUR ONE AND ONLY,
MARY-JANE |
 Thunderstorm101 2009-10-19 . chapter 3Very hot, but isn't "Greggor" still a player? And what Danny'd do to him if he hurt Sam is NOTHING compared to what she'd do to him if he hurt Danny.
Heh.
I wonder if Eliot's bisexual and often uses the "I'm not sure if it's OK to like guys" line when he's not sure if the guy's gay. What a creep. |
 Takachu 2009-10-18 . chapter 3Ohmai, would that be Dash now? |
 Trinity Fenton-Phantom 2009-10-18 . chapter 3great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |