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Murder Junkie
2009-12-07 . chapter 4
Ah, highschool romance... Effed up and dramatic, all thanks to teenage hormones. *grins* I just gotta read more!
Wicked-Lady-West
2009-12-06 . chapter 4
Guess who's gonna get hurt if they don't continue this story? *grins*
EarthBird
2009-11-24 . chapter 4
when are you gonna continue it??
it's pretty good...
and it's interesting xD
jejeje
well.. good luck, and... continue it as soon as you can!! xD
sayoo!!
DMHPsasunaru
2009-11-20 . chapter 4
Very interesting so far! Can't wait until your next update.
loser-by-choice
2009-11-03 . chapter 4
(loser-by-choice is to lazy to login)

This chapter was cute in it's own way. I love the way you made Dash so jealouse and protective.

Keep the pen flowing,
Much love, LoserBC
pelori
2009-10-29 . chapter 4
I'm really loving this fic! And i don't see all these grammar errors and typos you're going on about. it's been quite an enjoyable read so far, and I eagerly await the next installment!
Desdemona
2009-10-28 . chapter 4
okay, I fricking LOVE protective!Dash. He's so concerned for Danny's welfare, and so very violent. manly. -giggle- And Danny has NO idea what's going on, which is so totally cannon. Code name "clueless"

But what's an omake? Could you explain that in an AN or something?
Anonumuss
2009-10-27 . chapter 4
Brilliant story! I'm loving the confusion of the plot! It's brilliant!
Apple the Racoon
2009-10-27 . chapter 4
Great story! Please update soon!
Thunderstorm101
2009-10-26 . chapter 4
Elliot's such a creep...

Heh. He really knows how to play people. That's SO going to bite him in the butt later.
Trinity Fenton-Phantom
2009-10-26 . chapter 4
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Darmed
2009-10-26 . chapter 4
OOH, THE PLOT THICKENS 8D
OMAN, DASH, YOU'RE SUCH A POSSESSIVE ** ;D
I'M NOT REALLY IN THE MOOD TO POST A LONG REVIEW (A LOT OF CRAP HAPPENED) BUT LET ME TELL YOU I AM PROUD OF YOU :'D

YOUR ONE AND ONLY,
MARY-JANE
Thunderstorm101
2009-10-19 . chapter 3
Very hot, but isn't "Greggor" still a player? And what Danny'd do to him if he hurt Sam is NOTHING compared to what she'd do to him if he hurt Danny.

Heh.

I wonder if Eliot's bisexual and often uses the "I'm not sure if it's OK to like guys" line when he's not sure if the guy's gay. What a creep.
Takachu
2009-10-18 . chapter 3
Ohmai, would that be Dash now?
Trinity Fenton-Phantom
2009-10-18 . chapter 3
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
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