Sorry to see this end so soon. I've really enjoyed it. And I REALLY hope you want to do a sequel.

Please! Please! Please!

Ah! We have an ending! And it's a cliffie!

But its a very good story, and just what I'd expect from an actual episode - congratulations on a job well done.

And I hope to see your sequel soon!

~SnowFox3

Loved it! I'd be pleased to see a sequel...

i liked it cant wait to read the sequel if you are writing one

Well, if I were Gibbs, I'd be kind of ticked at Franks for killing Yakovlev before he got some answers. Mystery still ensues!

Loving your story!

Loved it! Always good to see Gibbs in a fight...

ow, this is getting better and better... good job! Now Gibbs has to go and find out what that meant, it not being Jenny's fault. Who's still out there?

more please...

liked the chat between gibbs and ziva...intrigued by the necklace

glad gibbs wasnt in his house at the time

i liked it cant wait to see what happens next

Brilliant! I love it!

Loved it! Enjoying Franks being around.

i liked it cant wait to see what happens next is jenny alive

Wow, you've got a lot of stuff going on here. Really interesting beginning chapters. I look forward to more.