Wow, this is rather brilliant, I love it! The plot's great and the character portrayal's too, as well, as the character interaction, especially Eric/Sookie, of course! Everything is also very well written!

Can't wait to read more, so please update soon...

Good job, I hope to read more soon.

Awesome start, and your characters are spot on. keep going!

Did you mean "Bill saw her and questioned her origins"? And, is Sookie starting to become less enamored of her dear Bill?

so so short, more please and a longer installment

i'm guessing in this story lorena kidnapped bill or had him kidnapped

the flying scene was awesome! and eric saved her life, again lol! great job, love this story, keep it up!!

What a great start. I simply loved it. You nailed Eric perfectly...Cannot wait for the next chapter!!

ahahaha! wot!! I love eric lol, he can make any situation workin his favor! brilliant job! i cant wait for the next chap! update soon!

Oh my god! Great first chapter! More soon please!

Go Team Sooric!

Great start, though Bill can meet the sun light for all I care, yes i know its bad but oh well.

more please

very good! please update soon!