I love this story so so so so so so so so so much! Thank you so much for writing an amazing story it's beyond amazing! I love how Ziva and Tony argue and fight not many fanfictions i read have that but i love it when they do! It's awesome when they fight loads because it makes them stronger :) Thank you so much for writing this i have read all the stories linking to this one and it's by far my favourite one! Can't wait to read more :D

Let me just say I have read all of the series as you will read in my previous reviews and I loved them all and this one. Usually I don't like how books or movies or stories are really just one big flashback but with this story it was different. This series was amazing the previous two were extremely detailed and well thought out. The storyline was great. This story was pretty good also and I was sad to see andy go as well as Jenny (I cried like three times when she died in the TV series) but it was all for the cause for an awesome storyline. In the words of Barney Stinson "It was Legen wait for wait for it dary".

OMG you had me up until 4:05am on a Sunday I couldn't stop reading it I read all of them I hate how Andy, Jenny and Faith Died because Jenny was just a Super,Sweet and Gracous Woman and Very Motherly too, Andy Because His Girlfriend Left him to raise their Little girl and he was just like Awesome and Faith because Collin had already had Hillary die and then his Second Girlfriend Dies but other then that I love it also I was kinda hating you for All that Ziva/Deron Bull but was finally glad the you killed the Misfit and I am nit angry anymore my Favorite Triplet would have to be Bonnie because I'm so much like her I hate dresses and only wear them on Special Occasions and my Favorite Quad/Quint would be Isabel just because she is so Damm CUTE! Anyway thanks Tiva,McAbby,JibbsAndKariFan

OMG you had me up until 4:05am on a Sunday I couldn't stop reading it I read all of them I hate how Andy, Jenny and Faith Died because Jenny was just a Super,Sweet and Gracous Woman and Very Motherly too, Andy Because His Girlfriend Left him to raise their Little girl and he was just like Awesome and Faith because Collin had already had Hillary die and then his Second Girlfriend Dies but other then that I love it also I was kinda hating you for All that Ziva/Deron Bull but was finally glad the you killed the Misfit and I am nit angry anymore my Favorite Triplet would have to be Bonnie because I'm so much like her I hate dresses and only wear them on Special Occasions and my Favorite Quad/Quint would be Isabel just because she is so Damm CUTE! Anyway thanks Tiva,McAbby,JibbsAndKariFan

I personally think you should do more, like maybe the quads growing up or something. But it's your story and a great one at that. Well done.

ohmygoddddd!this made me cry so hardd!how could you kill ANDY!i loved him!and that was just mean to make cole lose another loved one!ahhhhhhh and .this story WAS fanfic ever!even though i hate the ending/soooooo soooooooooooooo .

I read this whole story, in two days may I add ;) and all through this one I cried the way. During the series, you had me on the edge of my seat multiple times. I love how you placed the characters and I think this last tying up story was very emotional. I have to say the last chapter the tears were streaming and I had to stop because I couldn't read it anymore and had to compose myself. May I add Bonnie was my favourite charater and had me nearly screaming at my lapto when she faked her death. Keep writing . X

This is WriterUnexpected, but I can only review once per chapter sooo yeah. Anyhoo, I have been waiting for this for sooo long and it was COMPLETELY worth it. This series has been wonderful to read, and I'm happy I found it :) I LOVED the last paragraph I think it summed up this series in its entirety SO perfectly. I was completely freaking out about the divorce thing except I couldn't express it out loud because I was in the middle of class lol :) glad she came back and they weren't actually divorced Yay Tony! btw shoulder length would be a cute cut for her :) I just wanted to thank you for just this entire experience your an amazing writer, and I hope you continue doing this. And until you decide weather these characters story is over or not I'll be waiting :) *crosses fingers "I know every good thing has to come to an end, but here's hoping it's not quite their time"*

This chapter definately did the story justice. Great Job.

heyy this is actually but i'm not allowed to leave a review because of the stupid one review per chapter rule.

Anyway i started reading your first story in this series ages ago and loved it, so i read you next one and loved it. So i thought i might as well read the third one then and guess what i loved it. when you decided to take a break from it i understood, you have written that many amazing long stories it was a wonder you had any idea's left. When i noticed that you had added more to this chapter i was relieved because i thought she is such a good writter lets hope she doesn't stop and let it go to waste.

well reading this i almost started to cry, Bonnies book is so touching i loved it, it is the sweetest and saddest thing i have read on fanfiction, it amazed me. When i read the part with the bomb i was thinking where is she going with this, surely she's not going to kill more people off. BHut now, well i'm not glad that you killed them off, but if you hadn't off killed them opff then you would never of had this amazing chapter.

you truly are a brilliant writter and should write your own book, something along the klines of these three stories but will your own characters, there own history.

Come on do a McGee write a book, I'm sure you can get someone to publish it, if i was a publisher i sertainly would.

i love it it's great.

just one question are you leaving it there or are you going to write more? Personaly if you dont mind my input i think it sounds good how it ends.

dear me this was a long review oh well hope it helps and encourages you to write a book, but don't just forget about fanfcition we need your stories :P lol

omg i cried the entire story...i love all three of ur stories your a nice writer...evil sometimes...but nice

AH MA GAWD!

THIS STORY IS FINISHED. *BAWLS*

From A Fanfiction Angel

good chapter ;) very cute ;)

ELLE!

*CRIES*

No, seriously, I am crying, tears are down my face. I feel so attached to these characters, these past two and a half years have been an amazing story (stories)! I am so torn that it's over!

I did love the last chapter though. although I am SOOOOO SAD that you killed Faith! I feel so bad for Cole! If you ever write anymore of this series, please, please, PLEASE give him a happy ending! I'm broken for him.

and no! Mady died! *sob* you are horrible, Elle! you are making me so emotional! which just proves how great a writer you are! I love your style so much, and I know that I will be rereading this series again and again and again and again and...

Such a wonderful end to an incredible series! I love you so much (in a non-stalkerish way), and would love to see some more from you in the future.

EXCELLENT STORY!

OMG! YAY!

I'm so glad you chose that ending. 3

Finally finished hey? No sequal in the cards? Hehe.

Great story/ies, great ending.

xx

-Pippy-