wow
This was so good and powerful
I almost cried
It was very well written, very emotional, and so sad!!
Keep up the good work.

omg that's so sad:( I love Jem!! oh well, life doesn't always have a fairytale ending haha. great story, i really loved it!

I really like the way you added WW2 in, it gives a taste of History and Literature combining together.

oh this is so sweet! great brotherly love going on there. and, ha-erm, am i detecting some history lessons? :P