Great fic!

I enjoyed your story.

That's how it could have gone in Volterra.

sequel sequel sequel :) loved it wish that there were more!

Ah, sad & sweet.

I simply adore this story because if Alice and Edward would have been killed I could definitely see Bella and Jasper relying on each other forever.

A great story. Very well written.

I love it, Hun! Poor Bella and Jazz...

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Vala

I LOVES IT! very sweet!

I love the tone of this, and the idea that Jasper and Bella could be companions without the expectation of anything physically intimate between them. Nicely done.

Oh

Oh! Oh! Oh!

Precious, painful, BEAUTIFUL story. Thank you.

Handled so carefully and with such respect. Just . . . beautiful.

Sigh.

Thank you x

Beautiful story. Thank you for not making them lovers. This ending was perfect.

Poor Jasper & Bella! I'm glad tha Bella is back where she belongs, which is with the Cullens.

I very much enjoyed this story. Devastating losses and then companionship. I appreciated Jasper's willingness to expend himself on her behalf and her willingness to graft herself back into the Cullen family.

Great story!

Great and moving story.

You know I have nothing but love for your lemons, but there really is something special about your less than citrus stories. This was a definitely unique take on the classic what-if in Italy... scenario.

I enjoyed the balance between Jasper and Bella's need for each other, and was carried along with the story while it culminated.

There were some elements which I would have liked to see expanded on but, understanding the limited scope of the contest, I think that you made the most of the space and really allowed us to experience their connection. As always.. you leave me wanting more...