Its rare, but sometimes I find stories on this website that are truly worth merit. Such is the case here.

extremely well done :]

I loved this flashback story. :)

Absolutely beautiful, thank you for this one.

I loved this story. I thought it was well written and very unique. I really liked the last lesson. Finally something good happened for Vegeta. It was a desired change of pace. I don't quite understand some other comments about, One: sentence structure? I think they might mean the quotes, but they're quotes, and therefore don't need correct structure. Two: Vegeta didn't have a brother in DBZ. It was just a stupid little happy movie they shelled out after the fact. Don't count that, please. Back on track here... Great story, very good read. Keep writing!

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You disserve them! I absolutely loved this! Vegeta's life lessons were so tragic; I'm glad he's got Bulma (though I still don't fully understand how xD).

The betrayal of Raditz and Nappa certainly explains why Vegeta didn't care to see them go in the series. And the recount of his death at the hands of Frieza almost made me cry!

Very nicely done!

That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

I look foreword to reading more B/V fics by you in the future.

Happy writing,

Phoenixarrow

brilliant writing I loved it

There were some errors on your grammar, redundant words and yes, some room for improvement on sentence construction but hey, all these are forgivable because this fic's very introspective, and it's sweet without being overly sappy. It's so nice to read about the changes Vegeta has undergone, and we all know how hard it is to keep the Prince in character. _

Oh wow, that was just amazing. It was actually really sad, especially when Raditz and Nappa betrayed him, it explains why he was heartless towards them in the show. It's good that you ended it that way too.

Good job, oh and I LOVE your avatar. :)

Really great story! Very well written and great content! No biggie, but you didn't mention Tarble. The story survives without it so u don't need to go back and change it or anything, just thought I'd mention it. Once again though... Great fic! :)

great fic i like the end cute... very cute...

This was awesome! I liked it. The end lesson was a little off but I loved the pacing the development etc. I liked that you took the time to make the Saiyans a people and not just VIOLENT SUPER WARRIORS!

Frieza's a bastard and deserves to die-oh, wait, he already did...But you know what I mean.

I loved it, you get 4/5 super Saiyans and a triple E for effort.