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Aurorajaye
2010-01-05 . chapter 2
I see it's been a while since you update. More, pretty please?
Aurorajaye
2010-01-05 . chapter 1
Bravo, Sesquipedality! Keep up the good work.
goldeneyes20601
2009-12-22 . chapter 2
Any more to come? This could be a really great story! x
goldeneyes20601
2009-12-22 . chapter 1
This is cool, keep it going! x
Joon
2009-10-21 . chapter 2
need...update...soon...can't go on...
hahah really love this
more soon please?
HalfNelson
2009-10-16 . chapter 2
Gah, Angela's reaction to the interview was exquisite. That feeling of awkwardness and unfounded embarassment, even thought the other person can't actually see what you're doing, was perfect.

(It's 2:32 am so sorry if this makes no sense, the general theme is I love this and hope to see more from you soon)
AngelaCatalano
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Love the 4.2 Light Years to Alpha Centauri reference. I hope this is a nice long fic... your writing is great, and I can't wait to fall deeper into this story.
Miss Captcha
2009-10-09 . chapter 2
good! i'm expecting their meeting.
keep it going!
xoxo
Turpentin Chaser
2009-10-06 . chapter 2
Really enjoyed getting a little more info on what happened with the other Chase's lives, and the fact that Danielle WOULD get Krawkow ten years later hahaha.

Can't wait for more, hopefully soon.
WallaWalla
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
The only complaint I can mak is that these chapters are yoo short, and I'm sure that has more to do with me being
a greedy ** when it comes to this story.

I am absolutely enamored
For me this fic feels like the show, like if by some cosmic
miracle they ever brought the show back
I would want it to be this.
(with lotsa Ricky)
Lady Jane's Muse
2009-10-03 . chapter 2
well done on the quick update. I like the idea of Danielle and Brian being married. I also like Danielle's seduction technique lol. The only request I have is that chapter 3 is longer - there are a few things this chapter mentions (i.e who's Noah? What choices do Patty and Graham not understand?) which i would love to see explored in more detail.
Loking forward to the next update ~LJ~
Rumpus Reprise
2009-10-02 . chapter 2
I was overly excited to see that you had updated this story
in my psych class
and paid far to little attention to a rather boring lecture
as a result
=)
So happy to see more

I love the description of how Angela feels after hearing part of Jordan's interview
it was perfection
more soon please
luvjordan
2009-10-01 . chapter 2
I knew you were a good bet. :-) I really like how this is developing. I'm only going to complaing (vehemently) about one thing...it's too short. Hopefuly, short chapters mean frequent updates. Keep it coming.
Funnygrrl
2009-10-01 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed the start to this story. I think your 'voice' is great. Look forward to reading more.
Linds
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
I actually really like this! All of the other 'Angela and Jordan in the future' stories have this very non-canon feel to them.
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