Oh noees this is liek my favorite pairing now! xD

I like it 8D YOU SHALL CONTINUE WITH THINGS LIKE THESE KOLKOLKOLKOL

omg this was such an adorable story ;u;
it made me tear up and smile and laugh at parts
thank you for bringing this adorable story out in public ;u;

this made me very happy! i enjoyed this story very much! good job! i was sad though about kumajiru but then russia was so nice to canada and then he gave him a new bear! beautiful!

That was really sweet. I enjoyed it a lot. Canada is so cute. :D

D: This was sad D:
It was brillantly written~
I felt so bad for Canada D:
At least Russia was there
...
that just sounds weird XD

D'aw! I was never a big supporter or RussiaxCanada, but you may have just changed that. I actually teared up when I read Russia's letter...

A beautiful story!

KUMA-CHAN! ;_;

Normally, I'm not a fan of the pair but since Russia was just so thoughtful... -thumbs up-

very sweet! I like this fic very much^^

Ohmygod.
Ohmygod.
This was amazing and usually I'm more of the RussiaAmerica fan, but this has definitely become one of my new favorite pairings ever.
It was absolutely amazing, and the letter from Russia actually made me tear up.
Wonderful, simply wonderful.

I really enjoyed this fic :3 Ignoring Ivan's wonderful broken-English, there was /some/ grammatical errors (mainly in the paragraph where Canada hugs Russia.) but to me, you did not make enough errors that it was very obvious.

This was a really cute fanfiction, and the plotline was adorable and original for this fandom. I really liked it. I hope you write more for this pairing!

omg! that made me cry it was soo good por canda-kuun~nya *jumps Canada, Italy randomly comes into hug* wah!! i loved it...it was good :D

Oh man... I love this so much.

You did a wonderful job of making Matthew depressed, but not obnoxiously so. You wrote him amazingly.

AND YOU MENTIONED CUBA. -dies from happiness-

The way the story followed was also wonderful and sweet. You're really talented.

The thought of Kumajiro dying makes me cry D:

But I think the RussiaxCanada makes up for that :D

Are you kidding me? I absolutely loved this!! It was very well-written, and having Ivan speak broken english was perfect! Whether it was planned or not! I really hope that Kumijirou never actually dies. I don't know what I'd do if he did. But it was a very good story. Thank you very much for writing it! ^.^

There are some minor grammatical/spelling errors, but most of them were from Russia, and I wasn't sure if they were on purpose or accidental. Most of what I saw was basic, like the usage of you're instead of your and other such things. I'm actually wondering a bit if you used a spellcheck at all, or if you tried to catch all the mistakes on your own. If your word processor has no spellcheck, there are plenty of online ones that you can use. Beyond the somewhat numerous small mistakes, I noticed that your writing was quite choppy, it didn't flow very well in several parts.

Also, it felt like their relationship moved very, very quickly. There was no consent, it seemed, from Canada, it was Russia strongly asserting himself and his will quite strongly and steamrolling Canada into agreeing with it.

However, if you're still reading this (I know I'm critisizing a lot) I want to say that I like the concept and idea behind the story. It was very sweet to read.

So, all in all, decent fic. Problems with spelling and grammar that were minor. Problems with pacing of their relationship. Most of the other nations were like cardboard cut outs of themselves. Cute plot, adorable pairing.

Please don't be angry! I just want to help your writing become better, because you have potential and could be very good! Please continue to write and improve your skills!