She also wants to let you know she is sorry for anything else she may have done wrong.

I have to review this because you messaged my friend with hate when she didn't do anything wrong. You flamed her about a review someone else gave.

Her username is 'notloggedin' and she is in no way related to the anonymous person who wrote the reply. She didn't understand until she saw the other reviews, and she's really upset. She did leave a bit of constructive critism, yes(even though it didn't turn out right) but she did not leave that long anonymous comment.

I'm sorry for her, she couldn't reply herself because you blocked her or something. Please unblock her, she did not do anything.

lol. this is cute! I randomly found this while looking up "I love Tweek" on google! I cant wait to read more so please update soon! :D

Gosh, this thing that you call a story freaking scares me, so much I cannot get past the first chapter.

First, your teenage grammar and spelling disgusts me. I may be younger than you, or what you mentioned on your DeviantART page, but I refrain from using unnecessary exclamation points one after another after another after another. Try not to use to many capital letters, too. Your spelling and grammar really need to be worked on, also. Try using a word processor.

Second, OCs, or maybe you're meaning them as you and your friend, are usually disapproved of people who are more serious about writing. Since we have just met these characters, a description of their appearance could be helpful or else we'll imagine them as stick people or even dragons or whatever. You should work on making your OCs a little bit more desirable to read about because right now, I see them as annoying teen-aged girls who obsess over EVERY guy they see.

Third, keep the characters you don't own in character. Craig and Tweek seemed to be out of character if you ask me. Craig seemed to be doing things he wouldn't and I doubt that Tweek would push him.

Usually when someone gives you criticism, they would tell you that you have potential, but you won't hear that from me; I honestly don't think OC story have all that much potential. Let me tell you this before I finish, this isn't a flame, but mere constructive criticism. It took me about fifteen minutes to write this constructive criticism, so appreciate that I gave you that much time to make sure you get better.

She sings the mr hanky song, gives Kyle a cookie, and now next chapter the two girls are going to beat up Cartman. Great.

So, you've birdnapped Fang, went to jail with Iggy, and now are going to steal Kyle? Save some aesome characters for the rest of us stalker peoples!

Not a very good story, I'm sorry.
Way too much screaming, and Craig was OOC in my opinion.
You can easily get your point across without the use of capitals, or multiple exclamation points.

When you used:
“Why won’t you talk to us!” They sobbed.

You could have just used:

"What won't you talk to us?!" They sobbed.

It works just as well.

It was amusing, but still not that good. Sorry.