So. Well. Written! It makes me happy! Both of them were characterized very well, and Kakashi was perfect! Ah...so fun! Great fic!

wow, this is amazing.
i loved your whole insight on life, how it's not a story and everything else.
stunning.

I LOVE IT!

nice story you know I like it!

This was wonderful. I particularly liked the poetic flow of: "Life happens in the moment before dawn, in the warmth of sunlight on your skin ... in the blanks between spaces of letters you never send ... Life happens "despite" and not "because of" ... dew on grass tips in the early morning, fireflies coming out after dusk, the blueness of the skies at the end of summer, three stripes of sunlight on a forest floor at sunset."

Absolutely beautiful.

Aw, this is so amazing. I love the "unexpected moments" part- great job!!

when i saw this i became so excited, because i thought you hadn't written anymore sasusaku fanfics recently. so this made me really happy :)

it's so beautifully written. i know, i'm very repetitive, i always go on and on about how much i love your stories and how your such a good author, but i really cannot help it, lol. its the truth ;)

and, another thing i really loved was this one line (although there were many other lines i loved):

Life is always someone else's story--you are never the hero.

there is so much truth to this single line. honestly. it completely reflects my own thoughts, and that's just another aspect of what i love about your writing - you always seem to have lines that i absolutely agree with.

anyways, i really enjoyed this. i thought it was really subtle, and the imagery is beautiful. it's really enjoyable, to read your fanfics, and i hope you will continue to write more sasusaku fanfics. and bytheway, i love your okaeri-tadaima themed oneshots. ;);)

AMAZING.

LOVELY.

this was beautiful <3

:)

it was love.

i loved the ending. <3

-zanibarr

Aww... so cute. <3

The part about life was so beautiful!

i love the little phrases that you come up with.
"quiet little love stories" <3

I LOVE THIS. I'M EATING WITH METAPHORICAL NUM NUM MOUTHS AND IT'S INCREDIBLY UNDIGNIFIED.

But, it's your fic, and so, I gobble with glee. Again. Wait until you post another meme. ♥

*sniff*This is so beautiful! Especially the Okaeri and Tadaima part*tears gush like a waterfall* It's SO romantic!

It's Beautiful
Some of the sentences are so...deep :)
Can't find any other words to describe it.

Aw that was so sweet! ;)

... I'm kinda picky so I don't like it when people use "mou.." or japanese words in their fanfictions... (makes me have to find out what it means xD)

I love how Sasuke and Sakura didn't seem to have any true-love type feelings until the end ^^

It's so nice :">