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niwa-k
2009-11-29 . chapter 5
lovely and real cute^^ thank you
Acriculus
2009-11-22 . chapter 5
I must say that this story was alot better than I had initially thought it would be, what with the magical creature thing. <3 Marcus is one of my favorite characters, and I especially love when people portray a softer side of him. =)It doesn't happen near often enough.

The ending was my favorite, though. ;3

Well written. I loved it. ^^ I look forward to reading more of your work.
miadragonlover
2009-11-15 . chapter 5
Awesome! I finally finished it! YAY! I really enjoyed this story! I like how different you made it from other stories that I've read. I don't think I've read a single one where Harry ran away and didn't actually have to return. I allways wondered about a story like this. Kudos go to you for writing it! Incredible story! I'm so glad that you finished this!
~rah~
AkatsukiGurl21
2009-11-05 . chapter 5
That's so beautiful! So sweet! Awsome job!
Shire Fey
2009-11-04 . chapter 5
This was nice. I wasn't sure if I would like it but I did. I do have a question though... When did Harry become human again? Was it during the 'blast-wave of magic'? Other than that little thought I really did like it but I tend to like most of your work.
My Solitude
2009-10-29 . chapter 5
Ok, so, this is a good chapter. Maybe it was focusing a bit much on the intimate scene, but the ending is good. I don't mind reading about lemons, or limes, or whatever they're called, but too much is "too" much. Besides that, I don't think I saw any major/minor errors. I may have missed them for all I know. So, yeah...
seventhSINwrath
2009-10-26 . chapter 5
Wow, I loved this. I loved how Marcus was waiting for Harry, and how irritated Harry got with his 'friends'. I especially loved the pace of the story, explaning crucial things but not to the point of being novel-length (even if I do love them), but at the same time enjoyable to read and easy to understand. ^-^ I really adored the pairing and magical creautre in the story.

It was definitely an amazing piece, and I enyoyed reading it.
HarrySnape1989
2009-10-24 . chapter 5
Hello there! It was a good fic, not at all like what I was expecting ( not that I know what I was expecting lol) I liked the plot, it was very original. I think it was paced too fast though and I find Harry's obsession to become an animagi to be a bit dirtusrbing. But if he were as obsessed with freedom as he was then that explains it. I liked the pairing, I'm obsessed by unconventional pairings nowadays. I loved ho you described Flint though. So all in all a very good story.
PanickedSerenity
2009-10-19 . chapter 5
I loved the last chapter. It was very passionate. I loved the story for its uniqueness and quality, but the ending felt a little rushed. Over all I'd give it 4.5 out of 5 satrs. Keep up the good work! I love your stories!

ps- I am kind of nervous giving critisism lately... I just wanted you to know that I am not flaming... at ALL!
The Dark Lord Mudblood
2009-10-19 . chapter 5
I like this. I was a bit surprised it ended right now, I expected it to be a bit longer, but it's not the worse off for it. Not that I wouldn't want to read more of it, that's a given. :) But it's nice the way it is. Sorry for not reviewing for so long. I like the fact that Harry didn't fall in love right away, the potential is there, and it's practically one hundred percent certain he will - especially with the whole "mate" thing, but it's a bit more realistic. The mind melding thing was quite unique, I don't know if I've ever seen anything like it before, the closest is probably something someone did with Harry and Voldemort's connection. Anyway, thanks for sticking with the story and completing, as always, I look forward to any more updates. Cheers.
Xiiravi
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
I enjoyed this story very much Why? Because of the boys' 'fuck the world' attitude, the promise of reward after struggle, and a writing style that has never made me wince or caused my eyes to bleed. So thank you. ^^
Anna
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
LOL! They sure move quickly! I'm not complaining though <33
HeadGirl91
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
Yay! I've been waiting for this for ages... and it was well worth the wait!

I thought it was ace. Bit of romance, bit of drama. Independent!Harry. Mix in that lovely bit of lemony goodness and this was like my ideal fanfic XD

You never fail to amaze me, Kay x
FastlyFadingIntoDarkness
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
I was kinda if-y with the pairing but i luved it and was intersting and i like how you had harry not really care about the wizarding world and be smart enough to know when to get out and be very sneaky.
Elle H. Michaelson
2009-10-18 . chapter 5
I think this is a very well written piece. It's also the only one of its kind that I have found, which is incredibly shocking. I love how they both decide to say "fuck it" to the rest of the world. I almost want to know which side wins without Harry there to help either side.
~Elle
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