oh so sweet love it! lol i haven't gotten to read your updtea on folly and sin yet, but i bet their terrific, great fics!

LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THESE TWO. JUST LOVE!

i really don't understand why you think your writing is so bad. i've read fanfictions by many many many authors and honestly you are in my top 5. you are an amazing writer and if you don't follow a career in it i'll be shocked. this story was amazing and awesome and adorable and just a great read. keep up he good work and have more confidence cause your fantastic ^-^

The fics mirror eachother so well~ *sighs* Just. So. Freakin'. Awesome. Ikki's just so angry, but he's also so worried, and really, Kazu's too cute to resist.
>.< And the last line totally did it for me. "Not when he’s all you can think about." Ah~ such clueless boys indeed...
And btw, thank you for your encouragement. =] I will work hard!
Can't wait till next time~ ja!

Can I tell you, love, how much I loved this story? It was just so wonderful. I loved the choice of POV, and just...ah, you know, it was short, but managed to get everything that needed to be in there, in there.

I guess I don't have too many flowery things to say for this piece other than the fact that it was just so awesome. I love your work, love.

::flail splutter flail try to talk fail splutter flail squee::

I literally have no words. Im fangirling like WOAH. This was amazing and perfect and Ikki acting angry because he was worried and...and...

THE POCKY SCENE. Oh my god I want to this now. I do hope you know I just might have to drive across the country to find cosplayers to pay them to do this scene. Srsly. Love it love it love it.

[This line --> He’s stealing your breath, your everything and people are still staring and you hate Ikki, you hate him so much, but he’s all you can think about. <-- made me go adhakfhaw and melt.]

Your stories are always so full of passion and detail and I always find myself reacting the same way whoever is but this one...you out did yourself.

You made me incoherent and rambl-y and I really probably shouldn't write a review when Im like this but I'd forget and it's so amazing you deserve to read my long and pointless review. So hah. HAH.

This story. Such love. :Insert heart or ten here:

*insert squee here* I love that you did Ikki's POV! XD I think it really wraps up the other part of the story and ends it on a very sweet note with the last line. ^-^ Very good!

Well, Ikki ftw ..!

It's just perfect xD. Kazu pisses Ikki to the verge of ultimate apocalypse, being the nuisance he uses to be to our Sky King, ne ? xD

Having to send romantic shit after eating a pocky, as if Kazu just didn't want to realize that Ikki loves (and for that reason hates) Kazu already xD For he makes him doing stuff like pinning him to walls kissing the brains out of the Blonde nyahahahaa .. ^^.

To keep this short: If that (partially) was what you tried to convey, you exceeded my expectations - you always did. I don't know many people besides you who'd be able to display the psychic .. hum .. "design" of these two characters oh so well. And that's why I enjoyed reading this special chapter. I was grinning instantly, thinking "Oh yes, THIS is Ikki xD" ..

Again, I'm happy you're kinda back and I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading. Keep up the good work, will ya!

Oh my god, I loved it. :D I love the little stories you do like this.

I ADORE YOU. SIMPLY WORSHIP THE GROUND THAT YOU WALK ON. YOUR IKKI/KAZU FANFICS ARE ALWAYS SENSATIONAL. THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU FOR THIS! AND CONTINUE WRITING SUCH DELIGHTFUL IKKI/KAZU PIECES SUCH AS THIS ONE! *dances off in glee*

Uh well...I can't very well start this review the way I normally would, since I kind of just reviewed FaS with the...exact same thing. ono Wops I need more originality or something...which is funny since I write/draw...ahahahahahahahaha okay I'll shut up and review this story now hm?

Wow I just had a 20 minute distraction spree...this is getting out of hand - I'll do my best to finish this in the 20 minutes before my parents will most likely kick me off the computer. Ah good times, good tiems. /also - heehe oiling gears. Which gears? AIR GEARS? Or like, the little gears in the brain, that look like Ikki's brain when it zoomed in and it was like "HIS BRAIN IS MAKE OF AT. |D" Okay I doubt you'll remember that? Ahahaha I kind of have too many of the manga...21 volumes now I think? 22 maybe. But oh this story was much to cute to ignore yey I get to reread for a PURPOSE.

Section 1! Baw Kazu-babe, you and your hair. You get so much shiz for that hair, but ohoho that's one of the prettiest things about you. Your golden hair and grey blue eyes..quote courtesy of Ikki being extremely gay in the naked demonic cult. But we all know he loves it - it gives him a reason to bully you, a reason to touch you. Heehehe okay but really, he's so dumbly blunt I love it. "YOUR HAIR IS BLONDE. -seriousface-" "OH REALLY THANKS I HAD NO IDEA."

Ah races. I like racing. Hence my current home being the pool [work + practices = like...10 hours in a day is my record] but hahahahahahaha wait no we don't want to hear about me, we want Ikki being stunned by Kazu. Kazu's so amazingly fast that Ikki takes even MORE notice. It's growing. /haha some girl with dark pigtails...oh Ringo. But that's such a cute little mention, that he wouldn't be able to understand her eyes for 10 years. And of course, Ikki's not last, he's second. And beats Kazu for it. Keehee? I can't tell.

My tonsil hurts...but river rock skipping makes EVERYTHING BETTER, I THOUGHT YOU KNEW THAT. But well that's not really the point of this one, the point is to like, show how perfect they are for each other. Or well, at least how they get along at this point in their lives. Okay I can combine this with the next section - it's related [I JUST GOT REALLY UPSET THAT I CAN'T SWIM AT THIS ONE POOL ANYMORE..I'M NOT REALLY SURE WHY BUT..WELL MAYBE WE SKIPPED ROCKS AT THE SWIM CAMP THERE OR SOMETHING BACK TO AIR GEAR]. So yeah, again, more of Kazu going on about how perfect for each other, and then bwah. I dunno what it is with Kazu and the moon, but the fact that you keep drawing reference to it is so lovely. I love love love Kazu and I think he's a perfect moon. But in a, gravity and extreme tidal controller way, not a insignificant way.

Haha it was more than 20 minutes wow I'm easily distracted. Hurry Masi hurry. Ah Kazu. Girls. I love how blatantly you point out that, well, Kazu has NO interest. They just confuse the crabbles out of him, and he prefers Ikki now, mhmm. "She's cute. Hm Ikki...Ikki...nomming Ikki?" Horndog is also one of my favorite words that you use. Along with irrefuckable. I like that one. A lot.

YEY AT'S. I find that sometimes in fanfiction, not just yours, but mine and any other author in the fandom sometimes leave ATs out of the picture? Wait scratch that, but well...kind of? You tend to put them in a lot more than other people do. Like, FaS and the tag scene? I'm also really fond of that scene...anyway, the fact that you showed Kazu's immediate aversion to the thought, but he's still swayed by his darling love love Ikki, because he just...does that to the guy, is perfect. /the scene where Kazu chucked ATs OUT the window...bad idea, but hell, he loves Ikki. Didn't want to lose him.

GWAH the Yaou scenes. Kazu. I think that story you wrote, with Kazu's mental process while writing the note..-thinks really hard for the title but ah pulling a blank..WAITING. AHA THAT'S IT. -cheated and checked your page sh...-]] /HOLY SHIT YOU JUST UPDATED ANOTHER CHAPTER TO THIS... KJAFHLKJAFHKA SHIT NOW I DON'T HAVE ENOUGH TIME TO FINISH REVIEWS. I'll review that one tomorrow? Okay so like..I'm still surprised Buccha was limber enough to get his leg up to Kazu's neck...just saying...

We have a Buccha cosplayer for next year yes. I think there's too many sections for me to do this and for you to stay sane, so...pocky tiem. /also I loved Ikki eating rice off of Kazu's face. Okay. So like...the pocky scene based off of your Otakon Ikkazu pocky tiems? /hahahahaha the girls made me giggle. "HEEHEE LIPS. OUO OH YOU KISSED ME! -giggle giggle-" It's just...so Air Gear. So right. And so Ikki to be all "HAHA I'LL DO IT TOO I NEED GAYS TOO KAZU." Yet now the girls are upset? COME ON LADIES YOU GOT IKKAZU.

But oh the texts...I really wish I could skip reviewing this part but it would be rude, just - Kazu-love? That was a bad idea, honey. Or at least, I've found it to be, just saying.

Except, it turned out rather well for him, didn't it? I mean, if he didn't mind the publicity of it, he got smoochies from his Ikki darling love. And of course, it's all about him, right?

Gwah I love this, I really do. Incase you hadn't picked up on that yet. [I almost just said "pickled up on that"...]

Okay, off to read the part 2 - review will be tomorrow.

<3
GAH
HEART PULLER! LOVE IN ITS FINEST! reminds me of a character on P4, Kanji LOL Ikki is so damn cute when you write about it :) i love your view of him :D
KEEP UP THE WORK MAN!

Oh. My God.

This was so good. Last scene made me melt.

I'd love to see tidbits of these from Ikki's perspective. 'Specially the last scene. M. :3

Ah it's so good to read something of yours again :) There were so many things I liked about this story. For one, I love the 2nd person point of view when it's done well and you pulled it off phenomenally. I've always loved how you portray Kazu and Ikki and this story was no different. And the repetition of Ikki making fun of Kazu's blonde hair and the "because that's what boys do" really added to the piece. Lovely job as always, now I'm off to read the latest chapter of Folly and Sin!

Block or not I really enjoyed this. It was great getting a look inside Kazu's head :)