I loved the last line. It was such an Alex thing to say/think espicially in a situation as serious as that.

wow, this was great!! really loved the intensity of the scenes!

God, why are you such an epic writer? If I hadn't been already in love with your fics, I would be now.

Ah! I feel like screaming @ u..., y u end it early, I was n2 it! GOD!=O*sigh* oh, well. luved it!=D

Wow. Just wow. Awesome job.

this is def. one of the best WOWP fanfics I have ever read! it's amazing, I love your style and the perspective and everything. great job :D

gah, this is fantastic. i love your fics, amazing, as usual.

omg i loved it so much! the ending was awesome every part was amazing keep writing jalex you're soo good at it!!

I loved this so much. :) I love your writing style, and how you portrayed Alex and Justin in this story. I loved how they kept denying their feelings for each other, but in the end weren't able to deny it any longer. Loved the kiss in the end, too, so sweet. :D

Write more soon :D

This is amazing, simply amazing. You did a fabulous job conveying the complex emotions between the two, and the story is well-written too!! Excellent job, keep up the great work!

Yours is the writing I love to read the most. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for the breath of fresh air with this 2nd person narrative. I know it can be tricky, especially with such complex characters in Alex and Justin, but I think you did it really well and wouldn't mind seeing more if you ever decide to.

loved it. I really liked this part " A human heart, your science teacher explains, and it’s the only thing you hear at all that day, moves blood, is blood, is responsible for all the blood in a body, but now, your heart, you feel it bleed."

Aww, even though I got to read a bit of it last night, reading in it's entirety makes it so much better. It's different than your other stuff (but a good different). =)

The thing I find most daunting about writing justin/alex is keeping them in character while having them do such an (arguably, haha) uncharacteristic thing. But you've managed to do that here almost perfectly.

I always love your Jalex work, and this piece is no different.
I love the general angst and cannon in it. I really love the Hemingway quote in the intro. It applies perfectly to Jalex.
I love that Justin won't admit it to her- even though she's admiting it to him.
Good stuff!