Wow, that was actual heart-clenching worth

Well done :)

that was WAY adorable.

Very, very cute and sweet, good job!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Wonderfully written and also a clear view into what Edward was going through during this time. Love.

This has to be one of the best stories I ever read. I was almost in tears! Excellent job!!

aw that is so swet :)
your very very good at expressing edwards feelings toward bella :)
xx

Oh! Heartbreakingly beautiful. Suck a brilliant idea to take Bella's nightmares after New Moon from Edward's perspective. The writing is wonderful and I felt my heart ache with his words.

I absolutely loved it! Almost at tears, in fact. Wonderful :)

Well done!

Wow.. this actually pulled a few heart strings, and I'm not even a big fan of this pairing! With eloquent dialogue and intense emotions, you capture Edward perfectly. This is really sweet, and you did well in depicting the essence of the couple. Well done!