   Sky-Angel14 4/7/12 . chapter 1Awesome story! I would love to see more like it! |
| candyluvsu 7/8/11 . chapter 1 Awww wow that was unbelievably sweet :) Poor Edward xx |
| robertfan21 6/17/11 . chapter 1 Great story! |
| Elantrian 5/4/11 . chapter 1 I really REALLY wish that "Breaking Dawn" or as I have so maturely dubbed it "Breaking Wind" hadn't ruined Twilight so thoroughly for me. The movies were no help once so ever and in fact they turned me to the dark side or team or whatever the hell they're called nowadays (hey what can I say Taylor is just so much better looking). But you have done the impossible, you've made me like Edward again and god help me you have even made me feel sorry Bella once more, it's practically a fucken Christmas miracle (in May).
I bow to you Oh glorious fanfic writer.
El |
| madnessdownunder2 2/21/11 . chapter 1 Very nice. Pity we never got for to see the results of his actions, and a pity he can't keep his promise! |
| yeszigv 12/11/10 . chapter 1 OH my God! It was beautiful... really. Congrats! It's gonna be one of my favs. |
| juliet claire 11/14/10 . chapter 1 beautiful! one of the best ive ever read! u did a great job of incorperating mrs meyer's tone, and your own flair, totally sweet and true to the charicters :) defently on my favorets list! |
| Red Sadie 9/6/10 . chapter 1 First one I've come across with Edward living Bella's nightmare with her. I really liked it. It touched me deeply. You showed Edward fully understanding the reality of his decision to leave Bella. How decisions we make in life can have consequences further reaching than we can ever know. Good job! |
| letski 7/9/10 . chapter 1 love it!.. your a good writer short but sweet!...do write more!... |
| LauraEmily18 3/22/10 . chapter 1 I thought this was really good! Possibly Edward might go into more detail, but it didn't matter. It worked well, and he responsed to what she called out in real Edward style. Loved it! |
| Edward's Doll 3/17/10 . chapter 1 aw i feel so bad for edward :( great job |
| ImmortalBella 3/16/10 . chapter 1 Aw, I loved it! It was beautifully descriptive, a great Edward's POV! |
| kay 12/7/09 . chapter 1 Great job! I love it. After reading unsung hero, I can totally see that you would be a twilight fan. harry's such a romantic in that one, and he kept reminding me of hermione. Anyway, your edward is amazing as well, of course. thanks for the great read! |
| chanson pour l'hiver 11/17/09 . chapter 1 Wow, that was actual heart-clenching worth
Well done :) |
| sharpfeng 11/8/09 . chapter 1 that was WAY adorable. |
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