i know it has been close to 10 years but can you please update this story

I am so sorry about your mom I hope she gets over it. It is so sad that people are so scared about things like this but there is hope for the world with wonderful open-minded people like you. Your story is great so far though.

WOW! i feel very sorry for you. thats why i empty the history before i get off...and since it has been a VERY long wjile do you think you could continue soon?

Good for you for making such an effort to post this explaination. I'm sorry that your mother didn't allow you to continue with this story; it had a lot of potential.

Oh i know how that goes. Not ym mum but my grandpa. I can't date black people and if he ever read some of the stuff i wrote he'd go, let's just say, crazy. Although, hehehe, i have dated a black person. I'd hate to be my mum who is bi and his daugther. She also had me at 16 you can imagine that her life was havro after that little incident but we deal and you will to. Just remember when you're 18, you can say Bye-Bye and go off and do your on thing. Also writing femmslash does not make you anything except a writer. I write some femmslash and have a fanfiction about a combination of the four(circle of magic) but i'm straight. So just let her cool down.

Even discontinued, this is a good read. Pierce has spoken out against homophobia, saying it doesn't exist in Emelan, but it's actually more interesting this way.

I just wanted to say that I've had a similar experiance, only with an original story. I was instructed to wipe the file, let my mum check all future writing, and never do anything like that again. So I switched to notebooks. (So much easier to hide, but unfortunatly, not uploadable.)

goodness i am sorry for you (i havent read your stor, i would but i do not like reading unfinneshed work (bad experences)but i'll check back) good luck with your mom and i'm glad your more open minded than she is the world needs open minded people.

OH. PAIN. YOU POOR THING. THE "MOM, I DONT WRITE THIS OFTEN!" THING MUST HAVE BEEN AWFUL. DO YOU KNOW IF THERE IS AN INTERNET CAFE ANYWHERE NEAR YOU? I THINK IT MIGHT MAKE YOUR WRITING PROCESS EASIER...

This story is wonderful. I honestly hope you manage to get internet, reading, and writing time back. Anyway, this story is really really good! Hm... I basically already said that. Um... keep writing such good stories!

And, I hope your mother realizes that there's nothing wrong with f/f m/m. My parents are completely open with me. She practically handed me a book that had all sorts of stuff in it. My older sister has written things way more, um, detailed or something, than this with f/f m/m, and asked me and my twin and my mom to read it. We all love it, but what I'm saying I guess, is don't let your mother get you down!

This is a great story and I hope you're able to finish it! I look forward to another chapter, no matter how long it takes for it to get up!

First of all, excellent story. I love r/l slash.

Second, PARENTS SUCK!(I'm just so eloquent, aren't I?) Sorry your mom grounded you and all that. Believe me, I know what it feels like to have parents catch you doing something "innapropriate" on the computer.*thinks of the time mother caught her reading NC-17 fic and shudders* BTW, your plan is brilliant, although confusing. Try the public library instead of the school one. That way they can't stop you from doing it or tell your mother what you're writing.:)

And finally, are you on Sheroes? Your name looks familiar.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *SCREAMS AND ripps out her hair* Parents can be so evil! I like your friends, they are brainy...More storys..ish good...But...I *would* Like to know how this ends...pretty please? *sighs* It's just cruel...

SMGoddess

I can't believe you were grounded for writing this. I think this story is really good, it has a good plot. Plus Rosethorn and Lark make a really good couple. *shudders* Can't stand homophobes. And I know, because most girls in my class ARE like that. Can't stand 'em. I despise homophobes, most of the time.