Wow, and you stopped there? Why? More please. I like all the ideas you've put into this. If you don't keep posting it on Fanfiction.net, could you mail me new chapters at coolestpixie@hotmail.com because this looks like it's going to be an amazing fic. RG.

PLEEEEEEESE CONTINUE!!!!!

I like the beginning, but do you have the rest of it. I'd be glad to beta test it, just please send me a copy 1 way or another. I wish I could write as well as you.
--Gyr

Very nice - very science fiction-y - sort of Star Trek meets Smallville. Loved the Christian references - excellent way to bring in the Christ parallel for Superman, a very long running theme - Krypton's explosion being the Star of Bethlehem particularly good. Interested to see where you go with it.

Woah. That was pretty gutsy, calling the Christian Saviour an alien. Although your writing style is different, I rather liked it for the format of story you're writing. Besides, reading the same type of thing over and over again gets boring. Good job! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh cool!

More please? Soon?

Interesting story! I really like your style..its definately different from other stories I've read..but I really really love it. :)

Your nuts, but carry on writeing!

This story is... well, boring.

I think this could have been done better in actual story form. You know, like with dialogue and action. This is basically a list of facts. I read the whole thing hoping that it is was prologue or setting the stage for an actual story. What you've got sounds like a really interesting plot, but a good plot is just a skeleton. This needs to be fleshed out.