this is so sweet, it touched my heart :)

aww that was cute... i've always had i think for munaks (and bonguns, but oh well :D)

hm, i've always been under the impression that payon was the chinese town, but meh, i don't know for sure.

lol, seeing insulting reviews is great, seeing my friend blushing is great too, BUT, this is the greatest thing that I have ever seen. haha

OAO. Good work, you portrayed munak's longing and sadness well.

I liked it a lot although the ending wasn't really...uh...likable. No offense.

Anyway, nice fanfic! Keep it up

I really liked it...

Hello thar missus Hyacin

Haha.

Oh well, your grammar, is not as repulsive as you self-claimed, dear. Maybe some part sounds awkward, but that's all, and I don't see the reason why you should put yourself down!

The last time I logged in on my RO account was, if I'm not mistaken, two years ago. Haha. Reading this gave me a spell of nostalgia.

And I agree with Incross, putting translation for your title would help your reader. :)

Farf

Hey... why didn't you tell me that you've published this? If I didn't search your pen name, I wouldn't see it. _

Well, forget it. I'm glad you've published this. I've reviewed this story on Infantrum and I'm sorry, I'm lazy to translate the review in English. m(_ _)m

So...

Like I've promised you, I'll add this into my favorite stories list. )

PS: You don't need to do my request if you have no time to do it. _

Thanks for posting this...

Agh T-T

The story is nice. I like how you described things from Munak's POV.

And the touch of her faint affection was... well, somehow sad but it was touching T-T

NIce story, keep it up :3

NB: I guess it'd be nicer if you put an English translation for the title, so the reader would understand better :3