LOVED this! I love how you twist the movie around and make it so dang awesome. THANK YOU!

Very well written story, you are a very good writer! I liked the way you write everyone's thoughts - they all sounded very much like themselves. It was like watching the movie, only with more insight into the characters heads. Aren't you going to write any more chapters? Please do, I loved reading this!

Hi,
I really enjoyed your take on these movie scenes.
That would have been something if Lex was the one to tell Superman about Jason. I
liked that twist. Also Jason running to Superman and knocking them into the sea.
very visual.
Also, I really liked your view into Luthor's thoughts.
Thanks!

Interesting start. Looking forward to more.

oh WOW!! AWESOME! I am going to have to go read it again. Fantastic fic and fantastic writing! Thank you!

Cool!
I hope that isn't the end...end... :)

Tops! A wonderfully plausible alternate scene that was written so exceptionally well that it felt like i was watching it in my mind. It definitely feels like this could have been in the original movie. This was helped along by your good integration of original scenes with your new content interspersed throughout. Well done! I love reading scenes that involve Superman and his son, and how their relationship together will pan out. I Hope to see more little scenes like this one in the near future from you.

Oh, I really loved this fic- it was a lot more like Lex to take Jason with him and something about the movie that always bothered me. You captured the character's feelings and emotions brilliantly as well and I loved how you did the revelation of Jason's true father.

Great job!!