Hi :) I really liked your story. Beautifully written and very thoughtful, almost sad in some ways.

I read one paragraph of this wrong and now have a mental image of a kitten in a suit of armour

Excellent writing, I really love the atmosphere.

This writing is so great its epic quality...no...not epic...Legendary.

"Ain't they just as much a part of this city as the rest of us?"

That was beautiful. It was so very touching, I really feel like adopting a cat now.

Marvelous. I love the way your intertwine your characters, and timeframes. Thank you for writing this :)

I saw this linked on the nano forums - beautifully written, and I really enjoyed it! I really love the life you gave to Timmy especially. :)

Amazing. \ If this is 'practice' writing, I am in awe to think of what your works are when you're really trying. I hope you post more World of Warcraft stuff in the future. Congratulations on a truly moving short story. You should submit it to Blizzard, Or at least the Hearthstone Tavern podcast.

Have a good life, Aideyn

one word awesome

I'd say this is a bit better than pratice writing, almost brought a tear to my eye.

Marvellous,

Lord-Haw-Haw