having already reviewed 'End Run' when I first read it, and now seeing that my review as well as others' was erased, i don't feel any desire to tell you what I think of this one. I will, however, say in response to your own review, that you don't have to erase a story to fix editing errors. use the "Upload/Edit chapters" button and scroll to the bottom, and you cna replace the text of the story, wihtout losing your reviews. Now, either you honestly didn't know that, or you just can't take commentary. I hope its the former.

I'm not erasing this story because of bad reviews. I'm erasing them because I keep coming across spelling, grammar and formatting errors. I'm a bit of a perfectionist that way. Sorry if you those reviews coming!

Heh. You aren't the only author on this site who erases reviews that contain even a small amount of constructive critcism. You didn't do it with your first story, though, so why are you doing it with this one? I thought this story was somewhat better than "End Run," though honestly, that wouldn't have taken much. It remained pretty out of character and I really couldn't see most of the people having the reactions you showed to those particular circumstances. But hey, keep trying. If you continue to improve, you might actually come up with something the majority of us will enjoy and recognize as being related to BtVS.

Hmm, repost or erase reviews that aren't all love and kisses? I guess you didn't mean it when you said do your worst... Sorry hon, I still hate your story. To reiterate...petty characters, mean spirited storyline. In short, I don't like it! Let's see how long it takes you to erase the bad reviews this time...