:) Haha awesome. You finished! ...I haven't. Anyway, love how you resolved everything and the ending is so sweet it made me "aw" lol

haha Pineapple Security! i get it ;) nice
P.S. loved the story

How can anyone complain about a Chuck/Sarah story that ends in babies! I like how you brought this story from a very mysterious start to a satisfying ending. Great work, thanks.

Sorry to have not read this story till now. Don't mind I will comment on all 7 chapters now Good, Good, Great, Great, good, Great,and good. Like the flow so far thanks and looking forward to next installment.

Well, BR, that was a great way to end a wonderful story. You started off everything with confusion and drama, continued on by adding shades of romance with the flashbacks and combined those with suspense and action in the present situations, and finally upped the fluff in the end. Hmm, it's kind of like a classical piece of music. Anyway, a very charming family scene at the end. That Bartowski is a pretty smooth character, haha. I very much liked that last line, as well. Great job, BR.

DK

great story! yay sweet charah ending!

awee!
how sweet. ;D
amazing job hun!
much love
aby

I loved it! I love all of your stories, so... Thanks! :D

Sweet story.. I loved it. Loved the kids ... These two are soul mates and deserve to end up just as you have portrayed..
Thanks for the read.

thanks for such a great story!! looking forward to what you think up next...

I like it, thats the way the story should always end, happy.

This chapter was so cute! I loved the kids.

A fantastic story from beginning to end.

I love this ingrid michaelson song FF, everybody is one of my new favorite songs! Will this be over just her new CD or cover her older one too, Just curious? This is one of my favorite chapters, I know that I have said this before, but I just love the way you write the bartowski family, it makes me wants the show to eventually end in this direction, and if/when it does, I would want you to write them, or at least have a hand in it, you have an amazing way with words :)

That was awesome. I love happy family moments.

It is funny that you chose Jake and Sophie for baby names. We are thinking of Jacob and Sophia for mames of our baby.

What a nice treat to read on a saturday morning.

Thank you.

Excellent story BR. I enjoyed it a lot.

-BCF