 Shaggy Velma 2009-11-06 . chapter 2Oo WOW, I love this story, please updat as soon as you can.
Velms. |
 Billy N Brook 2009-11-04 . chapter 2Don't die, Face! Face used to be my least favorite character but now he's gowing on me because of your stories. Keep up the good work. |
 Ecda 2009-11-03 . chapter 2 Poor Face..Glad they found him and happy that Murdock is there too! He does know how to talk to Face better than Hannibal. |
 Liliththestormgoddess 2009-11-02 . chapter 2Oh, that's so sad! Poor Face :( But I think there's more to the story. Great description of the apartment, I swear I could smell and see everything there too! Continue soon! |
 trauma 2009-11-02 . chapter 1 oh my!...
that was really worth waiting for!
I hope everything will go well for the guys ;) |
 lunaz 2009-11-01 . chapter 2 Wow this was an intense chapter. You could feel the tension between Hannibal and Murdock and despair from Face. Well done. |
 subtleshadeofgrey 2009-11-01 . chapter 2Oh my poor Facey! Loved it even more than chapter 1. Particularly like the slightly abrasive relationship between Hannibal and Murdock. Both care deeply about Face yet have very different ways of showing it. Loved that even unconscious Face managed to steal the show. So many questions raised and I can't wait to find out the answers. |
 ncismom 2009-10-31 . chapter 2Just catching up on this one and realize that i need to go read your other one first! Great job so far and now, i'm going to go and find out what happened to get us to this point. |
 Long Live BRUCAS 2009-10-31 . chapter 2Ahh
So glad they found Face. I hope he will be ok and wake up soon. Now that they found him Hannibal wont want to leave him and will do waht ever it takes to make sure he gets better.
I love when Murdock called and yelled break then Hannibal was already moving before he was total in the van.
Cant wait until BA gets there and see Face. And the state hes in. |
 Calenmarwen 2009-10-31 . chapter 2Ah first review for chapter 2. Very tense, loved Murdock phoning Hannibal to break then appearing like that. I hope Face did change his mind, also that Murdock's with him when he wakes up, less stressful for him although I can't see Hannibal letting him out of his sight. Looking forward to more, hope you get them to work it all out. |
 Billy N Brook 2009-10-16 . chapter 1I can't wait to see what happens next. |
 WillowBurano 2009-10-15 . chapter 1Well...that's...mean...I really hope you don't just say soon, but don't mean it? Don't you. Cause that would make me a might bit sad...And you don't want your reviewers to be sad, do you :P yours worms |
 Afro7hundr 2009-10-15 . chapter 1It's a trap! |
 Calenmarwen 2009-10-01 . chapter 1Wow, what a cliffie! I really like this series you've been writing and after a chapter ending like that, can't wait for an update. I particularly like the way you write Murdock, I also believe he's not half as in-sane as he makes out. He also have every right to be mad with Hannibal, although he doesn't know the exact circumstances. Murdock and Face do seem to have the stongest friendship, and I hope that comes through in following chapters. Looking forward to a good story! |
 stbk 2009-09-29 . chapter 1Just great :) |