Cute story so far. cant wait till the next chapter. dont really understand whos who but if you write anything like your sister its going to be amazing. is she the one betaing? hope you continue.

Keep it up Lime Aid! ok that sucked. but good work so far.

*-*-*-* thats a bunch of cats that watched the sun explode. lol.

Good work lime. after all you are holding a dull butter knife to my neck to write a nice review. lol. i liked it.
keep up the AMAZING WORK!1