Are you going to update soon, cos' I'm desperate for you to update this!

Cool, great story although I don't know the original series. Keep it up!

This is a cute story. The idea is new, the people are in character (with very few OOC slips), and you can tell that you got more comfortable in this chapter because it was a slight improvement over the first.

All in all it's a fun read - I can't wait to watch Markus act like a complete 2 year old next chapter :)

this is just fantastic! keep up the awesome work!

Aw there aren't enough Markus/Valarie stories! Make more Make more!