| Reviews for Trials |
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dreamsafantasy 10/3/09 . chapter 2dun-dun-dun! *cue corny 50's horror-movie scream* it's the Dracula Bus! oh, no, wait, my bad. That's an 'Aqua Teen Hunger Force' reference. oh, is Sophy's date Dr. Brown-... *awkward pause as she can't remember his name* -ton...? that guy? and if it is, is he dating her to find out more about the Belmonts? hooray for updates! |
Mirai Reiko 10/3/09 . chapter 2I have the slight hunch that Ria may be unhappy with her mom's new man in her life. Also, the part where Isaac was watching T.V. on the sofa made me giggle out loud. Awesome job opening the story with the very first chapter. :3 |
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands 10/3/09 . chapter 2I had one of those jumping-up-and-down happy fits as I finished reading this chapter! So, excellent build up here. I'm loving what you're doing with the sequel so far. I love the introduction of more characters. The world feels very whole. And the dialogue was terrific. Great 'hair' descriptions, too, haha. I can't wait for more! |
dreamsafantasy 9/29/09 . chapter 1mwahaha, and so it begins... I await the next installment with great interest *more evil laughter* |
Mirai Reiko 9/28/09 . chapter 1Nice way to start of the story. I think it's more interesting and keeps the reader hanging when the first chapter introduces other the characters that usually end up having big roles in the story. Can't wait for more. :) |
Eldritch-Cien 9/27/09 . chapter 1Wow! Awesome start off to a sequel! So *smiles evilly* What's the throne for? :D I'm so excited! I can't wait for the next one, I'm so so so so glad that you've started the sequel up asdlkfjaeoighjflghraf teehee. Latz, much love 3 |
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands 9/26/09 . chapter 1WooHoo! Excellent beginning for this sequel. I really enjoyed it. It kept me sucked in from beginning to end. I can't wait to see Ria get back in on the action. This promises to be a very exciting story! |