This is such a unique take on the FFVII story! It's different, but in a good way. This is excellent writing! Thanks for sharing this! :D

I think I can say that this is one of the weirdest fics I have ever read. Weird, but definitely worth reading. I wonder how you are feeling about people reading your old stuff? XD; Anyways, kudos to you for writing this!

I can totally relate to the "not English/American/Australian/whatever" part. English grammar still baffles me. :] Exceptions to the exception of the rule of exceptions on most exceptions? Umm...no thanks. :3

It's not stupid. It has the high standard of all your work.

Wow. Delightful plot twist AND it fulfills what *so* many Sephiroth fans so deeply desire - absolvement for his sins. Wonderful!

Dear, sweet irony, how I love thee! o_O;;; This is warped. Completely warped. Good work! XD I read this with an amused little smirk on my face. Heheheh. It IS a bit farfetched, but I'm getting quite a kick out of picturing Clouds expression... Hehehe. Keep it up!

It's good. Confusing, but... good.

btw... THIS IS NOT SIVVUS- THIS IS HER BRO, RUCKUS, WHO WROTE MOST OF THE BRAWLERS STORY.

Wow; I was not expecting the way that turned out at _all_. The religious allegory is one of the thing's that's always attracted me to the FF7 story, and this is definitely an interesting take on it; Jenova translates literally as 'the new god.' Very impressive; and for what it's worth, I would never have guessed you were not a native English speaker had you not mentioned it.

wow, I found this story by reading a review you posted on someone ELSE's story...this was beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us! *WARK*

Hey, I LIKE this "foolish fairy tale"! I think it's beautiful...

By the way... if you want me to give you nitpicky English help on your story, e-mail me.

I lurrrve this! Its a hod story and its kool. Im a Christian and i ain't offended(and have no reason to be) , this a nice refreshing FFVII fic that, well, is juss awesome

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Very... intersting... Very... interesting... Ack, I'm being repetitive... I can actually see a bit of relation with Sephiroth being the "child of Jehova (that's what I call God from time to time)" and whatnot. I don't see much that could offend very Christian people, it was very... interesting... oO; Ah, yes, let me freak you out by saying to not call the "ex-light bearer" Satan, yet Lucifer. I actually burden myself with trying to figure out WHY he does what he does, is what he is, and to describe greed, since that appears to be the greatest evil of all... Yet anyway... Good story... Interesting... and Until then...

ech. The obvious religious message, intentional or not, kind of threw me off. YES, I DONT BELEIVE IN GOD! WHATCHA GONNA DO ABOUT IT, HUH? J/k. i rrally dont, though. anywayz, this was a very well-written story and an interesting concept.

oh my *gives a wide eyes teary look* that was very beautiful

Very original story! Although I am a CloudSephiroth person myself, it was refreshing to read somehting that was totally different from anything I've ever read. Good job! _

This is seriously an unique fic. I would've never have guessed - i thought at first the God's Child was Aeris. Well this is really a creative approach and as I said before I think you should write more. Well, see ya!