Very impressive. I love how you saw the parallel between Martha falling and Rose falling and ran with it.

wow! its really good!
i loved the way it changed POV's. im really intrigued to find out where this is going.
i love rose/ten fics :')
love it. keep going!
oh and can u read my fic 'through the void'?
thnx, Rose xx

:sniffles:

Thanks for writing.