Aww this was really good!

I love how the relationship formed between them.

Ah and your writing provoked a range of emotions throughout the story, amusement, sadness, and then a general feeling of awwww at the end there XD

I really enjoyed it! Good work! _

I liked this a lot! The decsriptions were written in a detailed and casual matter. It had a certain personality to it.

You did a good job showing the friendship between Eileen and Richard, it felt very natural and not forced.

They're could've been some linebreakers to seperate the different scenarios, though. Of course that could've been intentional to imply the impending chaos, so maybe nevermind? *lol*

Anyhow, nice work.

I...LOVED that...I've also always thought that but never got around to writing anything for it, you portrayed it perfectly!

Normally I don't like Eileen but she and Richard being friends makes me actually OK with her

Thank you for a very worth while fanfic!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG YES SO SOMEONE ELSE THINKS OF RICHARD AND EILEEN THIS WAY, TOO. Seriously, the way they talked to each other in the hall in the game... they were definitely familiar with each other from previous encounters, and... here those encounters are. Awesome! I personally really like the idea of the dynamic between these two. So well written, too. The only thing is breaks up the text weirdly so the paragraph separation is lost D: But I was able to intuit where the breaks were, so all is good. And what is good, is this story 3 Added to favorites for its originality and the extremely rare idea, baby.