This is a great fic! Really interested in reading the rest but I can't seem to join your yahoo group to find it. Would live any help to read the rest of caught. Thanks!

Have you thought of perhaps posting this to Archive of Our Own? (Or maybe lj?) It's a nice little community that's extremely friendly... and personally, I would love to read what else you have written on this.

I really hope you continue these, just one more chapter pleaase! You are an amazing writer, so awesome that I feel like I'm reading a book! Love your talent an technique and I hope you continue these!

I really hope that you'll continue this, because I love the first three chapters!

Luv it please update soon!

ugh, girl, you have at least a hundred reviews, for only three chapters. If that doesn't tell you to continue, I don't know what will. But I certainly like it. I would prefere you continue the other story first though, th one with vaders double life, sorry doen't remember the name of the fic. But really, this is popular, I can't wait. I wish i could add exclamation points, or smiley faces, but my keyboard is broken, lol.

LeaMichelle

i love this story and wish you would please write more!

I love this story! I can't wait to read the next part. Your writing is superb and very polished. Everyone is in character as well. I can actually "hear" them in my head, the way they sound in the movies, if that makes any sense. Sometimes, the characters are just so OOC in other fanfiction stories that you can't imagine Mark Hamill or James Earl Jones saying those lines.

You also write the torture scenes well-not too descriptive, but the reader has a very clear idea of what is happening and the pain that poor Luke has to endure. I registered for your yahoo group so I can finish the story there, so I'll review the next parts then. Have a great day.

-Zessira

So I admit I've been procrastinating on writing more of my own stuff by reading your lovely story, lol! (Thank you for all of the excellent reviews by the way!)

I honestly think that you needn't warn so much for the torture scenes but I am fairly desensitized to blood. The description is great, and what makes it truly disturbing is getting into Luke's head. You do a great job of keeping up with all of the characters, and keeping them in-character! I'm really impressed! (It's something I have trouble with which is why my stories seem to only follow a handful of characters closely.) Keep up the great work... I can't wait to read more of this, and then your other stories. :D

Overall: I love the re-write of this story. Thank you so much!

I was worried that the torture scenes would be dumbed down, but I love it. The editing did not do wrong by this chapter!

Did the original have it from Lukes perspective most of the chapter? Just wondering. I seem to remember this passage about Vader walking up and down the line of prisons, and feeling the tension and build up to him discovering the force sensitive Luke. I am not sure if that memory is from my imagination, or if it has been changed. I just can't palette Luke's fear like I thought I did the last version I read. Just wondering!

I missed this story so much, last time I read it, I was under 15, had it saved on a floppy disc and read it late at night on a 1990s thinkpad a friend had given me... I am now 23, still loving it. I don't know if you have edited it, but it seems a bit different. Ok. Next chapter!

love it!

Ouch! Cliff hanger. Awesome story so far... look forward to the next installment.