 AzureIzumi 2009-12-05 . chapter 5Oh gosh at the end was so CUTE, I like the way you write and I hope you'll continue.
-Azure |
 Elifer 2009-10-30 . chapter 2Please update, QUICKLY!
Great Story, by the way. |
 AzureIzumi 2009-10-11 . chapter 4Another awesome chapter, even if it was short! Keep up the good work Datenma! |
 Nadirecur 2009-10-05 . chapter 3 Omg, I really like stories with maps. It's easy to get into a story if you know more about the world that it's set in, so the map was definitely a plus for me. :D
Also, the links at the bottom of chapter 1 got cut off. Luckily for me I found them in your deviantart, but I don't think everyone else will look there. Just a heads up.
This is pretty good so far. At first it was ~okay~ but then it started to get really good and I ended up reading all of it in one go. Ahahah, I might be late for school today. I'm looking forward to chapter 4. ;) |
 AI 2009-10-04 . chapter 3 Awesome fic is awesome! Welcome back by the way!
I hope you keep making them, Your fics is so cool! :D |
 KasumiDestruction 2009-09-28 . chapter 2Oh yay! I love dramatic eye-catch moments! They're always so sexy! Looking forward to more! |
 Yukiya 2009-09-27 . chapter 2 Thank Goodness this pairing still lives!!
IsaacXIvan Forever! >:3
Great Story!
Can't wait for the next chapter~ |