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Spartan Evil Altego 10/16/10 . chapter 9
Good to see you back. And it seems that the writing style has taken a turn to the novel's style. Cool, although a little difficult and choppy at times.

Loved the title, it was exactly what I thought it would be.
Spartan Evil Altego 3/26/10 . chapter 8
Can't really give good reviews at 12:00 at night, but her we go.

Everything is top notch awesomeness.

Awaiting the next cool chap.
sandcat118 3/13/10 . chapter 7
Aww god, shame on me, I can't believe you've already uploaded three more chapters and I still haven't reviewed D8

Well, here it is: I think you really nailed the atmosphere from the movie (dunno about the book, I've read it in French, and I didn't really liked it, to be honnest XD). The characterization is wonderful, and I love your sense of humour :)

I think you really got the essence of "Jack" and Tyler down to a T (not sure of the exact expression).

Can't wait for the next chapter, eager to know what Tyler is up to :D

PS - Sorry for the typos, my keyboard is really not collaborating with me tonight XD)
RedWolf23 3/5/10 . chapter 6
Hey, nice stuff, keep it up. There isn't much to be seen in the Fight Club archive.
Spartan Evil Altego 2/17/10 . chapter 6
YES! TYLER IS BACK!

Sorry for the lack of reviews lately but I haven't checked the story in while.

This is a great story and too under apreciated. Thanks for the humor, dialouge and great fanfiction in general. :7
Spartan Evil Altego 12/5/09 . chapter 4
Nice story, I really like the way you present the state of mind Jack is in. You really capture that bluntness and simplicity of his thoughts amazingly too. Also: Tyler Durden has returned...
sandcat118 11/30/09 . chapter 4
*First review dance*

I laughed so hard at the flabbergasted joke XD

Like it so far :D

Saw the movie recently, and I thought I should check the fanfiction :)

Unfortunately, no one can get constructive criticism from me past midnight XD

So... Babye :D
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