 Spartan Evil Altego 10/16/10 . chapter 9Good to see you back. And it seems that the writing style has taken a turn to the novel's style. Cool, although a little difficult and choppy at times.
Loved the title, it was exactly what I thought it would be. |
 Spartan Evil Altego 3/26/10 . chapter 8Can't really give good reviews at 12:00 at night, but her we go.
Everything is top notch awesomeness.
Awaiting the next cool chap. |
 sandcat118 3/13/10 . chapter 7Aww god, shame on me, I can't believe you've already uploaded three more chapters and I still haven't reviewed D8
Well, here it is: I think you really nailed the atmosphere from the movie (dunno about the book, I've read it in French, and I didn't really liked it, to be honnest XD). The characterization is wonderful, and I love your sense of humour :)
I think you really got the essence of "Jack" and Tyler down to a T (not sure of the exact expression).
Can't wait for the next chapter, eager to know what Tyler is up to :D
PS - Sorry for the typos, my keyboard is really not collaborating with me tonight XD) |
 RedWolf23 3/5/10 . chapter 6Hey, nice stuff, keep it up. There isn't much to be seen in the Fight Club archive. |
 Spartan Evil Altego 2/17/10 . chapter 6YES! TYLER IS BACK!
Sorry for the lack of reviews lately but I haven't checked the story in while.
This is a great story and too under apreciated. Thanks for the humor, dialouge and great fanfiction in general. :7 |
 Spartan Evil Altego 12/5/09 . chapter 4Nice story, I really like the way you present the state of mind Jack is in. You really capture that bluntness and simplicity of his thoughts amazingly too. Also: Tyler Durden has returned... |
 sandcat118 11/30/09 . chapter 4*First review dance*
I laughed so hard at the flabbergasted joke XD
Like it so far :D
Saw the movie recently, and I thought I should check the fanfiction :)
Unfortunately, no one can get constructive criticism from me past midnight XD
So... Babye :D |