i loved the story, and how it developed and ended.

my only question is how did you come up with the pseudonym Violet for Shelly?

I have been reading this story for a while now. And I must admit this is quite an enjoyible story. Most of the characters I find have been kept in character very well so well done!

I do like where this is going as a story, quite interesting how Sportacus and Robbie changed rolls for part of it and then swapped back :3

Good luck on completing this story! Part of me is rooting for Sportacus and Shelly to get to together lawls! xD But I want Robbie to has a happy ending <3

oh, i hope you're not making Robbie such a villain. it would be nice if Robbie learned something out of all this, in the end. and if he got a happy ending with Shelly.

but i like where this is going.

Gr! Sportadork it's beign an **!!, Id tell him to knock it off If I was Shelly, and whats up with Robbie I mean ok he wants to win the bet but we all know that the "sportadoofus will leave town forever" has never worked for the villian and I tought he really cared about Shelly but again silly me to think that a Villian would care for anyone...ugh Robbie Rotten!

well, that was extremely interesting. granted, the way it is written is a little confusing. there is no real description, but that's okay.

i like it, and hope to read more soon.