This is a good story about what he thought. I think it is something close to what he was thinking.

Dark sad and yet, I loved it. It really seemed like things Edward would be thinking.
Great job!

I feel sad now...poor Edward. This makes me want to write a oneshot all about E/B fluff. Then again it makes me want to write a oneshot about Edward and his depressing self. Poor guy...

Dang Jacob he just had to be the one to answer the phone. Dang Rose too! She shouldn't have been so quick to tell Eddie.

I like this side of you LN12! Dark and sad is good...sorta. It's a nice time consumer. You know? It's something enjoyable but yet makes you kinda sad. That sounds confusing...sorry...

Aww, poor Edward. You did a great job on this! <3

How would one go about entering the contest?

Loved it also!

ha, that was dark. i liked it! :) (poor edward) ♥