Oh my, I'm not really sure what to say, I wouldn't want to be Hilbert...

Oh my... dear little Leo... forgive me Lauren, if I lose myself in the story for a moment... I will come back, dearest, I do promise that much. As a mother, I can do no less than to return to a child whose heart is longing for the security of a loving touch, no matter the color of his skin or the shape of his hand.

And... "he could at least guess somewhere around... oh... he didn't know... LATE. Extra with late sauce"... that made me laugh!

Splinter... Dear nezumi, be safe my friend. And do not ask me to abandon a friend. I could not.

Take care of you, Lauren. Once again, I am honored and humbled. You have written a character which I can only hope to live up to, and who humbles me in my lack while giving me someone to strive for. That, my dear friend, is a precious gift indeed.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

Aw! I like the little revealing at the end.
Good luck guys.
Eve

whew...

You've given me a lot to think about imouto-chan.

Funnily enough I was working on the next drawing just this morning... It's giving me fits, so it may be a little before it's ready for you, but I am working. The chibis are with my thoughts always now, as are you.

Take care my friend.
-Mary

Wow, I'm confused.
Too many holes.
Eve

Oh, goodness... the poor dears. And you left off just before we would meet them again?

I hope Qwerty is well, because now I am dying to read the last few bits... and that is terribly selfish of me seeing that you've posted two chapters today already!

Take care of you, my friend.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

Omgoodness... "as if he hadn't been interrupted by an editorial" had me laughing so hard I very nearly did wake Arek and Jessi, who are exhausted by a long night of "sleepover" which included no actual sleep.

And a second chapter in the bargain! Oh, I am overwhelmed!

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

OMGoodness! Splinter, honestly, are you TRYING to give the poor woman a heart attack?
heh

my friend. I did indeed enjoy the little tour, more than I can say.

Take care of you, my friend, and happiest of writing... and of simply living.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

I like it when you ramble ^^ It gives me an insight into your life XD

You named your computer? I may try that ^^

Finally... FINALLY got around to reading this! I'm SO sorry it's taken me so long... if I miss the beginning of a story it takes me a lot longer to find the motivation to start from the beginning and read all the way through...

But BOY am I glad I did! I woulda missed one heckuva story here! Your particular style of writing is probably close to if not the best that I've seen on here yet. Of course, the fact that it's chibi fic probably puts HUGE points in your favor... ;)

Man I just wish Mary had managed to get some pics, LOL! I woulda LOVED to see those! Those chibis are just too adorable to put into adequate words, aren't they!?

Again, so sorry it's taken me forever and a few days to read this but I've LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT! Now I have to get up and move, my legs have fallen asleep from sitting here for the last two hours... =D Thanks for sharing this awesome story!

Polaris

Still am loving this... as you well know.

Wait, what?! Kanone lives?!!

Oh... I ... I may have to... still... where are we now? Not at home. My floors are wood, but... I have no teapots to hold my flowers. (what a lovely image. I may have to go scavenging now at the thrift shop)... Hm.

As to rambling... ramble on. You made me smile with your Leo plush. heh

Take care of you.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

Let me guess...Lauren is you.

KANONE DIED?! Oh noes...it's funny, when he was alive I hated him...now I feel sorry for him TT-TT

Well, I can hardly scold you for sneaking on... especially when you have once again surprised me with delight.

Powerful chapter. Is this the end of Kanone? You made me almost pity him... I am glad he finally... "gets it" even if it is the last thing he understands. That is at the heart of the sacrifice, after all, that we should finally understand love.

I am sad to see this tale come to an end, but I know the conclusion will be one we can close the cover on with a sigh of satisfaction and with eagerness to go back to the beginning and read the tale again.

Take care of yourself, study hard! And remember, always, you are loved.

Rejoicing in the day,
-Mary

Wow, if this is what you write, what do you shove into the back corners of your mind?
Lol.
Eve

Oh, crap. RUN GUYS! RUN!
Eve