Hot as hell! Funny as hell! You killed it lady!

Brilliant! I loved it! Do another one plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz ;-)

Hot damn!

Man, that was so hot! GOOD!

Loved it!

HAVE MERCY! wow! that was ...was...well, damn...that was about the hottest thing i've ever read.

wow, that was absolutely fantastic! such an awesome moment between great friends. i love that they were all so cool with it but i really love the devotion edward and jasper have. that was sweet and stealthy of edward to make jasper's (and emmett's!) fantasies come true and jasper taking edward, professing his love and commitment to him was absolutely beautiful!

and emmett's signs were hilarious! i sure hope he gets his girl! :D

jodie

WOW!

That is awesome! So funny and extremely sexy and hot! You wrote so much into a one shot! We can perceive the love Edward feels for Jazz, the understanding and the friendship the 3 have being able of keep even after doing something so intimate!

It surprised me that Jazz still had the energy to make love to Ed after all that! It was beautiful! And Emmett's signs were hilarious!

Thank you!

Dani

very very hawt stuff!

I cannot believe that this was ur first slash! That was one of the HOTTEST slash scenes I have EVER read! It turned me on soo much... sorry if that was a wee bit TMI! lol But, yea... I love me some boy lovin' and threesomes are even better. Damn, *panting* I think u may owe me a new pair of panties. JS

SarahAH30 rec'ed your story for me when I asked for a really good lemony slash but I wasn't aware that apart from being incredibly hot your story us also soooo funny!

Fun, hot sex and sweet words of love combined altogether? I couldn't have asked for more!:)

I loved it!

MD

Hi

This was awesome beyond words... I laughed so hard and was very hot...

I hope you did well in the contest.. If it was me. I would have voted for you.. hands down..

3 Leona :)

Recently discovered slash and found this little story. Love that everyone experienced one of their fantasies, and took along on the journey. ;) Thnanks for sharing.

Oh wow, I read this story ages ago and I can't believe it I mustn't have left a review if it's letting me leave one now. Anyway, I loved it then and I love it now. So much so that I was chatting to a fellow slashy friend and it came up in conversation so I had to look it up and read it again So here I am, not making much sense.

Seriously, great plot, great writing and a great slashy lemon that I find hard to forget. Loved it!

Hot, hot, hot!

That was exhilerating and also wonderfully funny! I cracked up several times, but I especially loved Emmett's "Vegas" signs!

Wow!...a fun and hot threesome...great job.

Loved the dares...well the last one especially.

Sweet moment near the end with E and J in bed and their declarations to each other.

Thanks for writing.

Sue xx