Sorry, you won't see me for awhile. Recently, my computer "died of old age." In other words, the hard drive finally broke down after a long four years of service to my relative, and an additional five to me (almost six, actually).

I really enjoyed the fanfic so far, I think it is very cute! I hope I have a chance to read more soon.

Hope to see u soon!

-CF

It just gets more and more interesting! Peach is going with them! This wouldn't be the first time, she was my fav character in Super Mario RPG (although Luigi wasn't in that game). I can't wait to see what happens next.

Will Christy be alright? Will Bowser win? Will Peach be alright? Will Luigi be able to remain brave? Will Daisy appear? Will Peach ever wear a color that is not pink!? (Not that Pink is a bad color) Of coruse I'm just kidding about the Daisy thing!

Hmm. Is Christy going to do anything...rash? Same goes for Peach. XD And if Peach beats people up, I hope she can stomp on them with her high heels, because that would be painful, LOL.
Note: This wouldn't have happened to me because I hate all of Peach's dresses. Why? A. They're the same, even though Peach says they aren't and B. They're all PINK. Pink does NOT look good on me, ugh. XD;
~Michaiah, the pink hater~

Good God, you made a second chapter? If the first chapter wasn't enough to make my eyes bleed, I see there is more. As I expected, this was very boring and quite predictable. Did you give this any thought at all? I think my 8 year old sister could have written a better story than this! So now what? You will single handed defeat Bowser and somehow save the Mushroom Kingdom? I mean, isn't that the goal of all inserts? To emerge victorious when even the hero of the story fails? Furthermore, if you think my opinion was mean and abusive, then you have no business posting where everyone can read and express their opinions. I see that you can't deal with anything but reviews that praise you or your story. If you don't like it, you simply delete it. On the other hand, if I had said Ur story rox! !!11!! PLZ wrt moze, you would have left that. Forget writing and get a life!

I’ll admit I was a little uneasy when I realized you might ship Bowser in this story, but so far it seems he’s in character and the OC doesn’t seem like a Mary Sue at all (I keep my fingers crossed on this, but I have faith in you). Awesome job, can’t wait to read more of this quirky story please hurry! Ha-ha!

On the other hand trying on someone's dress without premisson is totally rude. I'm sure Peach will overlook it though since it got the girl kidnapped and all. Ha-ha.

Just as I thought you would, you deleted my previous review. Are you afraid of the truth? Ah just as I figured, you probably couldn't handle it. If that's the case and you can't handle something as simple as my review, you have no business posting on a public forum such as this!

Two words- Oh, CRUD.
Hey, I haven't seen you around in a while, I'm looking forward to the rest of the fan fic! Could this possibly be the long awaited Bowser x OC fan fic you'd been going on about for a while? And BTW, that other fanfic that WAS going to be Bowser x OC that I wrote was discontinued. ...Yeah, happens a lot, whatever, I'll bring it back soon enough.
I like the concept of the story, nice with the idea to make the Mario world real, did Awesome Rapidash come up with that or you?
~Michaiah, pleased and playing Bowser's Inside Story at the same time~
PS- What IS Peach's email address? LOL.
PS2- PlayStation2, LOL. Anyways. The two guards reminded me of those Goombas in Bowser's Inside Story that go "Pleease wait in the lobby! Soon the show will start!" "Start!" Yeah, I love those guys. XD

Awesome Story