|Reviews for The Game of Chess|
| chocolate-ribbons 12/12/10 . chapter 1
Ohmigosh I'm in ninth grade and I love Fai D. Flowrite and Kiku and Sebby too! 8D -high five-
Anyway, a cousin of Ciel, huh? Interesting! Sebastian as a model...O/O Oh my...
I like Luna! She seems a bit whack, just like me! XD Tjere were a few grammar/past-present tense mistakes, but I'm a grammar Nazi. T.T And for having English has a second language, you did incredibly well. )
| Ryle Culler 12/6/10 . chapter 9
poor finnian! I love your story and I can't wait to read more!
| KuroNeko513 11/25/10 . chapter 9
I can't wait for the next update : ) maybe the next chapter will include another "scandalous" Luna/Sebastian moment? ;D lol
| Black Crow 10/30/10 . chapter 9
OH MY GOD.
Did you, Yuki Uzumaki, just updated this story?
No fucking way. I can't believe my eyes-
Okay, that was seriously too much. Anyway, it's hard to believe that you actually UPDATED. That's a lot coming from me.
Now, about the chapter. I don't find it entertaining at all.
What's the plot? There's no addition to the story, it's just a filler. Seriously, when you put up a chapter, try to put something with a storyline in it,not just stupid filler that makes readers want to gauge out their eyes.
| angelicdemon 10/23/10 . chapter 9
yeah! finally updated!
can't wait for the next update. good luck
| FoxDemonGrl 10/22/10 . chapter 9
OMG! im so happy you wrote another chapter -
| Soultrancer 10/22/10 . chapter 9
LOL poor Finny. Sebastian is gonna tear him apart when Luna gets to the townhouse...
glad you're back loved the chapter and hope you update soon!
| pew 10/22/10 . chapter 9
very good story
| Namehere V2 10/22/10 . chapter 9
Thank goodness you updated! I've missed this story so much... to the point where I barely remembered it. I hope you update again soon, this story has great potential.
| Princesa de la Luna 10/21/10 . chapter 9
amusing, i can't wait for more thanks for updating. please keep on making the chapters long. please update and good luck until the next chapter have a nice day.
| Princesa de la Luna 10/21/10 . chapter 8
| Raven Nevermore Witch 9/4/10 . chapter 8
Please update soon, I want to see what happens next.
| Soultrancer 8/12/10 . chapter 8
wow this is actually really good not many people can capture Sebastian's character but damn you pulled it off splendidly!
to answer your question in the last authors note about your character being a mary-sue, no i do not believe that she is one becuase she has faults but at the same time her perections even them out. please dont change anything about her!
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
| Anith 7/18/10 . chapter 8
I want to thank you for this remarkable fic! I read a lot of OC stories but I think that its the best of them.
It really impressed me. He-he, now its my favourite fanfic _
I even thought about translating it xD
To my mind your story fits the atmosphere of the anime. I think that the characters arent OCC and this may not always be found in no-OC stories.
Sebastian is great *_*
I think that you showed and have felt this character in a really great way.
Also I like your OC character. She isnt an average Mary-Sue, as for me I "saw" her as a live and interesting personality.
And, of course I like that your chapters are long and there arent mistakes(maybe I was inattentive but I didnt notice them).
Really,Yuki Uzumaki I love you for this story! _
Please, update next chapters!
P.S. Sorry for possible mistakes, English isnt my native language but I tried to do my best when I was writing this review _
| Namehere V2 6/29/10 . chapter 8
Please oh please, post another chapter! Its been 4 months. Dx