wow that's promising! i hope you will continue to write it!
so good luck!

great, update soon?

This seems interesting =) Looking forward to more.

lol this seems interesting! plz update!!

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE.

whom are you baseing your ooc charather of? Have you been watching saki by any chance?

I have to say, the premise intrigues me. I don't necessarily like yaoi, but truth be told, I will give any story a shot.

The premise is one that I haven't seen much of on this website. That's what drew me to it. The writing is decent. Not great, but not bad either. You definitely need more detail. A lot more.

Here's something you wrote: “We really shouldn’t be doing this,” Akari Fujisaki groaned for what seemed to be the 20th time as she glared at her childhood best friend, Hikaru Shindo, “I mean, this is your grandfather’s shack; maybe he has stuff that he needs.”

You made the wording a little cramped by referring to Hikaru in the same sentence. Plus, there wasn't much to think about there. Here's what I'd have written:
"We really shouldn't be doing this," Akari Fujisaki groaned. She believed it was the 20th time in the last few moments, but she couldn't be sure; her childhood friend Hikaru could be so annoying. She couldn't help but feel that they were intruding upon another's privacy; she let it be known by saying, "I mean, this is your grandfather's shack. I think maybe he has stuff that he needs."

See how my example gives so much more for the reader to be engrossed in? That's the kind of stuff you need to be doing. Dialogue is not everything. And even between characters talking, you can include quite a bit of material that the reader can become interested in. I mean, this chapter was quite choppy. It can turn off some readers.

I think you've got good potential here if you just paint the picture for the reader a little more deeply.

Please continue this story!i can't wait ;)

Hmm, this looks interesting so far. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Very good. Can't wait to read more!

this story has a lot of potential but you will loose readers if u put yaoi

its very difficult to find a decent story of hikaru no go without yaoi

friend ship is ok but dont go anything beyond it

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Dammit, you just HAD to do that! You have a potentially AWESOME fic idea, and you have to add in random yaoi! Why again? Did this have a point? It is completely unnecessary. I would have read it, too... from the first chapter it looks interesting. But now I won't, on a'cause of I refuse to read **.

dont really see any thing so far of the story, just a beginning here, awaits to see more of the story before i have an opinion, bye

i realy cannot wait for the next chapter this looks like it willbe cool

The summary sounds like it's going to be interesting so keep going with the story and update soon.

AmethystNight88

Wonder how your going to do this... I think I look forward to finding out.

What's here's well written. Looking forward to the story!